|Reviews for SIS (Smoldering, Immense, Shaft)|
| princeselisa chapter 1 . 2/5
That was great! Loved it
| SyonaAntonyMasenCullen chapter 5 . 1/29
Please write an outtake with the dildo and the real thing!
| L chapter 13 . 12/15/2017
This is a really good story so if you can you please continue writing more of it.
| Molly May Pinky chapter 13 . 12/4/2017
One question though ... I may have missed it as I was reading this story late at night.
I know why he was called "Bigs" but I missed why he called her "Bitsy"
| LadyBugQueen421 chapter 13 . 11/19/2017
Great story! I absolutely love it!
| IGOTEAMEDWARD chapter 13 . 11/8/2017
Another brilliant story.
| IGOTEAMEDWARD chapter 5 . 11/8/2017
| onlybelieved chapter 13 . 10/29/2017
I've really enjoyed this story, thanks for sharing! I think everyone who writes about disabilities should enlist the help of someone who really knows what they're talking about in order to paint an accurate picture. So often disabilities in ff are just used for sensationalism, so thanks for doing what you could to keep it accurate :)
| fanfictionalcolic chapter 13 . 10/22/2017
A lot of question have been answer but one remains. How did Edward and Charlie got friend?
| fanfictionalcolic chapter 3 . 10/21/2017
Just don't understand how Edward could be jasper's adoptive brother and Alice doesn't him when she is about to Amy jasper. Secondly how could and emmet get hire as a stripper like that even if they were strippers when training
| CayStar chapter 13 . 10/4/2017
This was so sweet. I loved them all!
| Sian xxxnxxx chapter 13 . 9/28/2017
I want to thank you for writing such a great story, I loved the characters and your portrayal of a deaf Bella. As the parent of a child with a hearing impairment and having friends in the deaf community I am drawn to stories that show some aspects of the deaf community. I thoroughly enjoyed this story and the humour in it xxx
| Guest chapter 3 . 9/23/2017
I think this chapter should say 8 inches growing to 10?
| StelenaClaceLover09 chapter 13 . 9/11/2017
i love this story it is awesome and I love this series :) & i am happy that Bella & Edward are Married & i am happy that Rose & Em are Married & i am happy that Ali & Jazz are Married & I am happy that Everybody has Beautiful Children's
| Guest chapter 11 . 9/6/2017
Loved the wedding. That speech Bella gave was so sweet and caring. Truly a wonderful speech. I loved that Aro made Charlie take time off for the honeymoon. Tanya and Charlie gifting their homes to Alice and Bella was unbelievably generous. What an amazing gift. I can understand that both Tanya and Charlie would have difficulty deciding which house to live in or, even if they wanted to. Wonderful decision to move to a new place. It was funny that Jasper pointed out the house across the way was for sale and that Emmett just may purchase it. Yay! The training day was great. Very interesting and riveting. Even though nobody real was in imminent danger, you still rooted for them to get 'everyone' to safety. The car scene was tough. Bella getting in the car and waiting it out with the 'person' until they passed was so kind of her to do. I knew I suspected misogyny in the asshat reporter. Dick. Loved that the men were pointing out that some of the women off the roster were stronger than them. Hopefully, this dick doesn't do something awful in his piece. At least Aro was smart enough to have film crews there to record the whole thing. Bella's conference, for lack of a better word, was very good. She does that so well. Very informative. Even interactive at one point. She did so well. I had a deaf friend when I was a little girl and learned the alphabet. I still remember it to this day. I've always wanted to learn the rest of ASL but, never have. I shelve it with the French lessons I want all the time, as retirement things to do. The homecoming of Tanya and Charlie was fun as well. Jasper razzing Edward was funny.