Reviews for Unexpected Talent
Guachico chapter 1 . 8/14
This made me laugh out loud for real. Nice work.
deppenjaeger chapter 1 . 6/30
that was hilarious,.. but the pun in the end?.. that 10bucks in the cookie jar please.. that hurt..
Grosvenor chapter 1 . 2/9
Parcel mouthOh, very droll! Lol!
LadyPhoenix68 chapter 1 . 1/15
obviously a parseltongue would have a parcelmouth
Kai chapter 1 . 10/12/2023
Hahahaha! Great! That typo always makes me cringe. Sometimes I wonder if fedex, dhl, or ups have a basilisk in the basement of their companies' headquarters. Just for their parcelmagic, of course. Finally there's a story where it's appropriate.
Latarra chapter 1 . 7/19/2023
Wonderful story. It was even worth the pain of that last line.
bisda chapter 1 . 5/24/2023
You got me :D that was glorious
Ice Demon Ranger chapter 1 . 5/14/2023
Oh *grimacing* What terrible play on words. Hilarious.

Thanks for sharing.
ColoradoBee3500 chapter 1 . 4/2/2023
Very funny! Any time you get a brainstorm like this please share :-).
E1adar chapter 1 . 3/4/2023
Damn near hurt myself laughing at that final pun. Great job.
Shortmike24 chapter 1 . 2/7/2023
hahaha. loved it. thanks
bigmac2759 chapter 1 . 12/27/2022
This was great! Thanks.
TomHRichardson chapter 1 . 12/12/2022
That pun at the end is atrocious and cruel. I love it.
Specky Clarke chapter 1 . 11/14/2022
Brilliant; absolutely brilliant.
Jestrbob chapter 1 . 9/14/2022
Groan!
You got me with the pun!
Earned you a follow!
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