A great story.

Whether there is such a wide difference in power, the minute Madara touched Sakura (in ANY form), WITHOUT HER CONSENT, is non-consensual. He raped her.

oh shit/!:?!

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Im sorry, but the passage from
"In reality. With you! ...to "THEN BUILD IT BACK FOR ME!"
go so fcking hard. If this was a song I would have it on repeat. This is my 3rd reread but those lines still hit like a mf. My god.

This is my favourite MadaSaku of you. I felt Madara was truer to canon (not really from the fact that you are picking up straight onto a canon arc as opposed to most of your other stories which are AU or Sequels to Canon but also from his behaviour).
Not that he is OOC in your other stories but more of the fact that he is a bit lost or not a monster yet in them.
Here there's definitively an edge of violence, withdrawal from the world, old fashioned, arrogant and dispassionate attitude which I thought matched . especially that never-ask-just-take attitude which you apply to their first intimate scene, was a very good interpretation of him.
The ending suited my personal preferences but you made it very plausible as well.
Well done!

Ok so I have to start off with saying that your writing and description of the characters are really good. You manage to keep sakura and madara true to their characters, but also writing them as they develop. I have read so many fan fics where Madara is described as a maniac and sadist, but he isn’t. He’s a little cruelyes. That is mostly because in naruto anime he is a man with nothing more than a goal. Your fan fics of him show a realistic character development that would be canon if Madara actually had love.

Also your smutty scenes are really good… too good at times. I do wish however for maybe more fluff.. sorta like cuddling and just erotic touching that isn’t always directly aimed at the genitals. That said, I don’t in any way dislike how you write now. As a woman who enjoy pleasing a man and giving bj it is nice to read smut that includes it.

I had some problems trying to understand the dream world at the start, but I figured out as I went. This is also something I enjoy with your MadaSaku fan fics. Just like this one and TLOS. Your plot and stories are different from most standard plots, and they are so exciting to read that I would’ve read without it being MadaSaku love story. Just the interactions.

I really hope you’ve kept up writing and some day write your own story. I would buy a book written by you. Thanks for the amazing stories

And then Sakura dies before Madara. Heartbreak, war happens. LMAO HOPEFULLY THAT DOESNT HAPPEN

I LOVED this edited chapter! I loved the flow of it!

Gen and Yume, Reality and Dream. i caught on before the A/N :) very clever!
i am chinese not japanese, however kanji and hanzi have almost identical meanings/interpretations so i'll try to explain how i see it. "现" is the simplified writing of "現". 现实 reality. however 现代 means "current" in the context of describing an era or ideas or practices, so google probably translated 现 (by itself) into "current".
梦 dream, and is unique in its interpretation. it doesn't have any other definitions so there's no other translation possible.

I loved it️

I cannot say with words how much this story means to me. I am new to this story so I read it from the beginning all the way until now and when Sakura screamed to build Madara’s clan house back from the ground up, it just STUCK WITH ME. There is so much emotion and love between the two, that they make such a powerful couple.

I absolutely admire the character development throughout the chapters, the revisions you made have made the story so incredibly rich, I feel like Madara’s cadence and penchant for humour is captured so beautifully. This will become definitely one of the stories I read over and over and over again.

Thank you so much for writing, I am so grateful for having discovered this story.

Thank you so much, I love your writing very much

Wow this is so good! Just wow! Thank you so much

I must have read Dreamt at least 3 times, and every time I fall in love with it deeply and utterly.
At first I was reluctant of the dreaming prompt, but when I started reading I couldn't stop. Had it all in one go.
How you portrayed Madara is quit fascinating, he is funny, sometimes he even seems joyful, yet he is so ruthless. And his violence is delectable... oh the scene in the cave...
And Sakura is as captivating, strong yet fragile.
Finally what really gets me in this story is how you made the dreams real, even more real than reality.
Love xx

Lmao the part where she’s explaining everything to her teammates is so freaking funny!