Interesting story! Look forward to the next update :)

I like a Harry that has been exposed to the magical world at least some. I also like a determined, somewhat angry Harry at all the manipulations! Good job!

I normally don't try to shit on fanfics but this is honestly pretty fucking dull. You say its a completely new take but all it seems is a copy of the original books with some small additions.

This is excellent work. I hope you are able to get back to it soon. Thanks for sharing it.

Harry got extremely lucky, but he did manager to keep his head on. I wonder what came of Quirrell?

Why do I get the feeling that Harry is being potioned or being bespelled to not perform up to how he started? Possibly Albus' doing?

I have to wonder where Harry has received these insights he seems to have about Wizarding World.

How does Harry know about what is to happen?

Thanks for this interesting story.

"to refuse the given" by Snark does not show up in . Can you please give more details?

This is well written and intriguing start. I am not quite sure who the two speakers are. Dumbledore and Snape maybe? I am not that familiar with Obscurials. I have only seen them in one other fic, but yes, they are interesting. Good prologue.

Great chapter. Is Muric being Grindelwald too obvious cause I definitely think he is.

Great story so far. Loved the irony at the end.

. Boring..
Dissapointing

Harry potter is far from lazy not even the canon was lazy if was he would have dead and he worked hard in Dudley home and he never applied himself because of how he was brought up by the Dudley and the beating he got when he performed well so it became his habbit but here u have different take where harry potter knows the wizarding world yet he is as pathetic as carbo and goyle , if u like the dick of malfoy so much u should write about him not harry potter but u bitch know u will get that many views, favorite and follow so u r using harry potter to probably write tge shortest harry potter character who is as strong as carbo as intelligent as goyle and as submission as the death eaters were to voldmert and surrounded by the same set of friends and house your ff is anything but different , can't believe I even this ff had promise after reading the first chapter now after completing the entire ff this is probably the worst one and there is nothing it is basically weakest version of harry potter character otherwise everything is the same shit

Even in canon harry potter was the most powerful for his age who always gives his best in dangerous situation and u want to make us believe he lost to malfoy because crowd pressure or whatever shit excuses u wanna give lol and this was supposed a new take up what will he do with new clothes lol this harry potter is worse the carbo and goyle may be by different means u mean weaker than carbo and goyle u should have said that , nice way to get some ff by promising something giving exact opposite in return but don't worry it will still flop as u have made big blunder with chapter 10 and now u can happily go and suck the mighty and powerful malfoy 's dick