|Reviews for The Fox Fire Ring|
| Yusuke Urameshi - Mazoku chapter 5 . 2/14/2010
Great plot idea- okay story. Okay considering there are sequels (which I am going to read) maybe the point I'm about to make will be fixed in later stories but I have to make it. Your characters have no back stories. Who is Nightshade and why does she do what she does? Who was Emily before she returned to Gotham? In order to make your characters come alive you have to give them lives that were lived! To have a present you must have a past! Also there the same mistakes like last time... If you ever get back to this please re-edit.
| THE MAYOR1 chapter 5 . 2/27/2003
GREAT GREAT GREAT SEQUALE ! AWESOME STORY !
I LOVE THE POWERS YOU GAVE EMILY. IS TERRY GOING TO GET ANYTHING NEW IN YOUR NEXT STORY, BECAUSE THAT WOULD GREAT!