Reviews for Cracked
D.G. Ling chapter 1 . 5/28/2005
Hehe,sneaky Brad,escaping with Naioni like that just to go makeout.
deon chapter 1 . 7/9/2003
wow this is a great fic i wish it was longer tho
Maelgwyn chapter 1 . 4/13/2003
Aww, sappy goodness...

And I have been pointlessly reading peoples fics (yours are just too good) so there :p.

I did enjoy that, who doesnt like Nao/Brad? They are destined to be altogether (aargh!)

Bit, (who has now been killed twice, Van once, Fiona once and, soon another prominent character) should be killed! Muhahaha

And CO2 is Carbon DiOxide, which I know you probably know, and it is used in the firing of an air pistol or equivalent. I suggest that you also put in that the AZ30 Vulcan Cannon has a small electormagnetic firing mechanism, whereby the shots are accellerated by a magnetic field (that is true too, it is so that the vulcn gun can rotate at a higher speed)

Mata ne!

Maelgwyn
Guardian of the Moon chapter 1 . 3/18/2003
Short and Sweet!

Moonie
Amrun chapter 1 . 3/1/2003
It was okay. Kinda corny, but corny can be good sometimes. _
Shadowwolf5 chapter 1 . 2/26/2003
AWESOME! WHO! I needed a good one-shot fic! Great! _
LizzehBoo chapter 1 . 2/26/2003
giggles. i luv brad and he seemed extra sexy in this fic. plz read my fics! i luved this one!
Piratical Nonsense Youkai chapter 1 . 2/23/2003
hehe. i like br/n stories, and that wuz a good one! keep writing! oh yeah, one were you talking about when you kept saying "bad author!"? sorry, brain-dead!
elf-princess4 chapter 1 . 2/23/2003
co2 1 part carbon 2 parts oxygen

sorry i just love science

more please