|Reviews for Compromised|
| mille libri chapter 17 . 10/11
I like their toast at the end - a fitting tribute to Thane's memory! And it has been my pleasure - I've really enjoyed this. (And am still not to Andromeda in gameplay, so I appreciate the lack of spoilers, but I've loved getting this glimpse of the characters!)
| mille libri chapter 16 . 10/11
A fitting conclusion - I like that Drack doesn't give Thane something to live for as much as he gives him something not to die for, and the choice to live is bittersweet.
| mille libri chapter 15 . 10/4
I love the image of Drack in the drell temple, contemplating the religion as he knows it through Thane. It's very thought-provoking.
| Esper17 chapter 1 . 9/27
The begining had me laughing cause it reminded me of Borderlands and Marcus "So you want to hear a story?", thane again, Drack is perfect for those stories. I loved listening everytime he had a story to tell.
One of Thane Krios. Holy crap! Let me pull up a seat and a mop just incase I drool.
So far this got me hooked and I can't wait to read the rest. I am interested in tge story he has to tell for one of favorite character's. 3
| mille libri chapter 14 . 9/26
Wow, that's a powerful line - "what I'm hearing is one voice screaming two men's pain". This whole chapter is so stark, you can feel Thane's anguish through Drack's voice, and it's so resonant.
| mille libri chapter 13 . 9/26
Love the use of "obdurate". Such a Thane word. I'm as always impressed by the depth of Drack's emotion and how much he tries to hide it.
| mille libri chapter 12 . 9/7
Thane's inner torment, the pain that drives him and the essential goodness that makes what he does such a strain on his soul, are beautifully drawn here, especially as interpreted through Drack. It's a really nice chapter.
| mille libri chapter 11 . 9/5
You have Thane's essential gentleness perfectly here, darkened and deepened by guilt.
| Jayfeattheris Awesome chapter 10 . 7/10
ugh... so bored... is it sad that fanfiction is now my only source of entertainment? The Destiny 2 beta is a week away, I've become to Raids( but rarely find a team, which is a problem), and I'm going through a creative slump. I can't find anywhere to binge watch all the Marvel films(and I've never seen 'The Hulk', which is a crime). My crazy levels got too high, so I dumped all my crazy into a Mass Effect fic, but now I'm not inspired to finish it, and everything is just generally disinteresting.
*hopeless sigh* The life of one with ADHD is tough.
| mille libri chapter 10 . 7/10
I like that Aria knew them both and was prepared not only for their request but with what she wanted in return.
| mille libri chapter 9 . 7/8
Nice combat writing - especially as interpreted via Drack. I don't know his voice (still haven't made it to Andromeda) but the way you've written him is really consistent and interesting.
| mille libri chapter 8 . 6/19
I really like the way this is progressing - the investigation and the deepening of Drack's emotional involvement. (Also, as someone who's not likely to get to Andromeda for quite some time, I appreciate that you're letting me get a feel for the characters without any serious spoilers.)
| mille libri chapter 7 . 6/14
Drack's such a softie at heart. And it doesn't surprise me at all that Thane's friends would be so protective of him.
| Jayfeattheris Awesome chapter 8 . 6/14
Thane, Thane, thane. Such savage.
| mille libri chapter 6 . 5/31
I'm really enjoying Thane as seen through Drack's eyes - and the reflection back of Drack through Thane's, which is a subtle and difficult thing to accomplish, and you're doing it beautifully.