Reviews for In Our Dreams
Piosonivy25 chapter 19 . 9/6
absolutely love this story keep up the good work!
WolfofAvalon chapter 19 . 6/23
I am so glad you are continuing the story! It’s a very cool concept and I love reading it!
Cimar of Turalis WildeHopps chapter 19 . 6/12
I imagine if Jack gave Nick a chance he would like him. And it would help him prep for when he meets Skye. XD A great chapter and I really enjoyed it!
Wolfx1120 chapter 19 . 6/8
All caught up to your Zootopia fanfics now... Hope to see more updates soon :3
seakard chapter 19 . 6/3
Cute story. Something tells me tho, that JACK will be the one to Initiate trouble and Try to frame NICK for it!
the Red Omega chapter 19 . 6/3
when are we getting skye again? 3 to 4 chapters right?
imjustlikehumphery chapter 19 . 6/3
Great chapter lunar, keep it up! Jack I know ya have ur reservations about Nick when it comes to Judy but ya need to at least give him the chance to prove that he's not a typical fox and that he won't hurt her like Gideon did when u all were young. I'm glad Jack has Chamby to lean on and converse with though as he told him what he personally thought about Nick. While it wasn't flattering when it came to the fox it didn't paint Nick in a bad light either. Like Chamby said he's not causin any trouble else he'd be payin him a visit. Simply put Nick's not a bad fox and it's pretty clear from what Jack's seen of him and Judy that she's comfy bein around him. Can't wait for the next chapter!
Elite Shade chapter 19 . 6/2
OMG YAY! I'm so happy that we get to read a new chapter! And, hehehehehehehehe, glad to see one of my wolf boy in the background there! I have a sneaking suspicion that a certain foxxy boy is going to be joining the local chapter of the ranger scouts...
J Shute chapter 19 . 6/2
Now there's a fic I haven't seen in along long time...

I'd like to say it was a welcome return, but... Well it just reminds me of the issues I've had with this fic. We get jack being angsty about Nick being in, and though we get a few fun individual moments along the way, it's mostly diluted by new background characters doing background things, Eliot being inferred as being Eliot, etc before ending with everything the same as the beginning. We get a little notification about the bad stuff going on in the city, as we know before, but once again you fake out before we hear anything new or interesting... And being the nth time you've done this (the same can be said for lots of things in this series), the patience I've had has just worn through.

Sunny's reaction was fun, unlike the head standing bunny who kept on skipping Jack's issues and ended up contributing nothing (that theme again).

Hearing that we were going to the jrs, I was excited. Nick might be going there, so much angst and then potential for character development and emotions oh my... And he did come... but then did nothing. We just saw him from Jack's pov, just standing around doing nothing. Yes Jack might be biased, but we saw no evidence that he was nervous at first and then working through it, opening up and being happy. And yes, we may well get a Nick POV of this next chapter... But will anything really change or develop? Will anything big really happen? Will Nick do anything other than stewing in his own confusion as yet another batch of disposable 'crazy zanny mammals TM' do stuff in front of him, before returning home as the same mammal that left...

When I started this fic, it had so much promise. The fab four all interlinked but never realising it. A whole world with a dark conspiracy and mysteries going on in the background, which you slowly learnt more about...

But then Nick went to BB, and instead of the threads slowly unlocking you got endless repeats of the same stuff. Brand new crazy zanny super bland disposable mammals being introduced, making a flashy spectacle before zipping away, all while the three there remain stuck in their exact current mindsets, contrivance after contrivance used to stop anything moving forward and developing at all...

You can't just keep giving fakeout after fakeout of any new info coming up, or the characters developing, or on why Skye is in trouble or anything and expect readers to remain invested. One is usually enough, two is pushing it... But seriously, how many times is this now?

Sigh... As said, this story started out so unique and strong... But now? Rather than being excited that it's back, I just felt bland and frustrated, again. Which I think is a great shame.
GhostWolf88 chapter 19 . 6/2
Why do I get the feeling that Judy is gonna open a can of whoop-ass on two littermates, and Jack as well? An how much trouble will all of the Scouts be in when Bonnie learns of Jack's speciest attitude?
For the answers to these and more, stay tuned for the upcoming chapters...
Guest chapter 18 . 12/9/2019
Just found this fic and LOVE it. Really hope it keeps going.
Ranger A22 chapter 18 . 10/4/2019
I love the story can’t wait for more!
Cimar of Turalis WildeHopps chapter 18 . 5/11/2019
Looks like there could end up being a battle royale for Nick among the does in the Hopps family between all these bunnies liking Nick. XD Let's hope that Judy gets that #1 Victory Royale when all this is over lol. A lovely chapter with several amazingly hilarious portions within, including the ending with Bonnie and Stu thinking Nick was a shy bunny. Great work on this chapter and it was enjoyable! :D LOVE IT!
WolfofAvalon chapter 18 . 5/8/2019
I keep waiting for this all to come unraveled. Poor Judy is gonna die of a heart attack and Nick is gonna die via trampling (or more accurately drowning?) by a fluff pile.
J Shute chapter 18 . 5/7/2019
Hmmm. To quote the cast of Monty python and the holy grail... GET ON WITH IT!

A decent fluffy chapter, with the standard urges to thumb certain bunnies, and grumble about the inevitable getting delayed...

This dinner better be soon and better be worth it! Because with the amount of labour put into the build up, I'm hoping for something worth it all!
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