Being that I don't read the Author's notes, when he mentioned Hakuno I had a feeling he was No Name from the Mooncell, seeing as he has no True Name, this just makes me feel vindicated. Hell, even Counter Guardian: EMIYA has a True Name, no matter how depressed and self-hating he is. The complete loss of memory also makes sense, what with being a Forgotten Hero and in a world that seems to be seperate from Alaya and Akasha means he also has no Legend.
On Chapter 3 by the way.

Good story

what about reinforcement, alteration, and structural grasp spells that are often associated as being part of Shirou's repertoire of magecraft spells

Interesting that Archer hasn't gotten any level ups-it's almost as if his strength can't be measured by mere numbers.

Second time I’ve read through this and I find it amazing still! It’s well written and I love the concept! I also love that while it is in first person, you still stuck with how Shirou will most likely act still as well! I hope this gets updated once you have the time and if you still have the inspiration to continue this! Also if you have any other recommendations of stories similar to this one please let me know

did this guy actually just fucking died? did corona get him or something?

Still waiting

So who is Shirou going to woo this time? Is it gonna be Freya or Ishtar?

I'm glad I came back and actually read through this, it was pretty good. Dead as hell, but it would have been interesting to see more. Seemed like it was actually going somewhere.

100% made a believable development it flows perfectly.

As far as fighting style goes, no major issues, just that leaving purposeful openings was a thing Emiya did once against Lancer and kinda got Fanoned as his fighting style when that battle isn't actually indicative of that and more that he adapts. I forget the specific reasons for it in that battle, though I'm sure you can look it up, it's one of, if not his first fight with Lancer that it happens, also you can probably find some reddit post that goes in more detail.

Leaving purposeful openings is unoptimal and is more likely to get yourself smacked unless you're already massively more skilled or faster then your opponent, but in that case, your already massively more skilled or faster.

Otherwise, I enjoyed the fight scene and believe you did a good job.

This has been very good so far! However the first person threw me off at first but I’m glad that it didn’t turn into a complete SI. Keep up the great work and have fun!

Please my dear author I need more T-T

Lol true name is gone, well its true shirou emiya is never been really his name, and he did walk in that flame that burn everything and "shirou" sacrifice everything just to live a moment longer, his memories, name, other people before he collapse and was save by his father.

Lol, so many people complaining about his height when it was stated that he‘s still a kiddo. And if ya‘ll remember, shirou before the Nameless/archer growth spurt is 167cm or and now don‘t be surprised 5,479 feet... roughly 5.5. So ya‘ll should be quit and actually read before unnecessarily complaining