Reviews for A Lame God |
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![]() ![]() Looking forward to more. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nice chapter dude can't wait for next |
![]() ![]() ![]() I mean akitsu has to be there. If its a forced choice go her, but por que no los dos |
![]() ![]() friend this is after the 4 shinobi war friend naruto is a demigod since he is the reincarnation of ashura the youngest son of the sage of the 6 path Naruto has his sage mode transformation of the 6 paths Naruto has a rinnegan and sasuke's sharingan |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great chapter here. I actually read all of the chapters in a short time frame and I am liking the story. One question though, something that I have been wondering for a few chapters. What happened to the harem? I saw the confirmed but not final in chapter 10 had the numbers 1, 2, 3, 4, 7, 8, and 9. Did you decide that it was too much or something? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yay! New chapter! I really hope that Yukari gets his sekirei too, maybe older this time? I don’t share your point about strong Ashikabi because all of that with Minato where honest winging. In the manga is clear that all of them wanted to be with him. The only problems there were always ambiguous about it Was Tsukiomi because she had being brainwashed into thinking that all men were bad! And also a lot very old fashioned medieval costumes about things. But her reacting to Minato was honest. The other problem was Homura because he wanted a woman Ashikabi, but he end up reacting to Minato and that was bad all the way. I never liked that decision made by the author About Akitsu in the manga she was with Mikogane who collected her first. The same about the other guy who had three sekireis they all reacted to him. So the problem as you see is more about Homura Maybe Tsukiomi and that is. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great story, I love the new different perspective and interesting canon break, you have given us with this story. It was great to read a variant with almost no Minaka and a Naruto who didn't want to deal with his s***. Can't wait for the next chapter on this or a couple of your other stories. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Who else will he wing |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nicely done, definitely added to my good list of FFs. However the comment regarding Fury was a little confusing. Several times throughout the FF, Naruto mentioned other supposed fictional characters. He even mentioned Fury in an earlier chapter, that seemed to go along with his jokes regarding he was Clark Kent. If you want to go that route, great, but it does make it hard to know when it’s a joke versus reality. Also, is this true MCU where X-men and FF are not part of it or a mixed version? See you around the water coolers. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Thanks for the chapter. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hmmm, do so we going to see the sekirei fighting Thantos and helping the Avengers, if so then have Tony Stark wing Kochō, number 22. (Image her being winged after creating the Iron Man armor. With Pepper running the company and her to make sure Tonya is safe being a hero with support of Tony Start.). Allow Naruto to keep those that you have listed above, but would love for you keep 08 part of the harem as well. I look forward to seeing the future of this story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great job loved it thanks for all your hard work |
![]() ![]() ![]() Triple crossover with the MCU... Aight, imma head out. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great chapter looking forward to more |
![]() ![]() ![]() Unless you have the motivation to get this story to something near as long as your story The League Summoner, then you 100% SHOULD NOT add a third crossover like MCU. It's just more story you'll never get to since this story is 6 years old and you haven't even gotten to the actual meat of it yet. |