Reviews for A picture of you
KittyKat198 chapter 1 . 12/25/2004
You have the same story three times
Banana Belle chapter 3 . 3/10/2003
Another great chater, keep up the good work.
Banana Belle chapter 2 . 3/5/2003
The story is coming along nicely, but you really need to do something about the format. It is extremely difficult to read, and it may end up turning potential readers away. Keep writing, I hope to see another chapter soon.
Banana Belle chapter 1 . 2/24/2003
Nice start, although you might want to try writing longer chapters. Another suggestion would be to double space; it makes the story easier to read. Keep up the good work, I hope to see more soon!