Reviews for Ash the hope Prince of equestria
Boggie445 chapter 3 . 9/3
I would rather say ash is the prince of hope Because prince of friendship just seems like he is married to twilight which may or may not happen
masterart chapter 6 . 8/30
what about pokemon/x-over this will be ash x x-over harem. the story go ash is in aloha region with his new friends when they found a cave that hold strange gem that unknows to everyone.

ash is the one to stumbble upon it and he teleoport to strange place of castle-mansion (it fuse castle and mansion in one) and find a looking like heart universe (it like univuerse but it shape a heart), when ash touch it he have power go different worlds of dimensions and meet new friends.

but ash must beware as one villain who after called the dimensions heart it said it had power to go other worlds and power to creast time and space and power to rewrite history if the power use good he or she use it for good and save the whole univere.

if fall in the wrong hands, evil will use it to cover the whole dimensions into darkness and rule the univere forever.

ash must protest he home the other dimensions world. he also must team up a heroes and also discover his own history and creast a harem to have family of his very own.
bleach1990 chapter 6 . 8/25
also i want you to work on this story to
GirlFish chapter 5 . 8/3
I'm interested in seeing how Ash handles Discord after he breaks free from being a stone statue for so long. (I mean that guy is quite the headache inducer during that time.) *But he doesn't seem as bad as King Sombra, the Changling Queen, or that demonic centaur.*
Guest chapter 5 . 7/31
nice
Nanatangxe chapter 5 . 7/15
GREAT STORY! I kinda like it this way... hope you can make more!
jdkeller2000 chapter 4 . 6/24
Hope you update your Pokémon and tuff puppy cross over soon
David Miller chapter 5 . 6/19
Where's The Rest Of The CHAPTERS!
Guest chapter 5 . 6/19
Seriously, why are you only writing small bits of the chapter?
jdkeller2000 chapter 5 . 6/21
Shortest chapter ever when will you update Akame La Kill
Guest chapter 4 . 6/19
nice
Infinity Ash chapter 4 . 6/16
awesome chapter
Guest chapter 4 . 6/11
nice story
Guest chapter 4 . 6/9
Uh where's the rest of the chapter?
pensuka chapter 4 . 6/6
There are only 7 words on this chapter
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