|Reviews for Harry Potter and the Blue Pill|
| Guest chapter 1 . 8/30
| hunzbookwyrm chapter 1 . 7/11
Great story hope to see more soon
| EmeraldGuardian7 chapter 1 . 6/19
Interesting story. This kind of thing is not normally cup of tea but it was interesting none the less. Good job!
| sunsethill chapter 1 . 6/8
Yep, you did a nice job suckering us from one cross-over to another. ;-) The whole dream within a dream within a dream just makes my head hurt! I'm eager to see how James foils the baddies.
| Kyo Tetsuei chapter 1 . 5/30
I have to ask, are you a pdx native? There's a few details here a bit too specific.
| agentinfinity chapter 1 . 5/25
| alec-potter chapter 1 . 5/25
You really are evil. I hate inception and the mind fuck it causes.
| AndrewWolfe chapter 1 . 5/14
I was enormously amused by this, and while I'm sure there's a continuation to it, what you've posted doesn't strictly, I would suggest, need one. He's out of the dream and not sure if he's REALLY out of the dream: while it's not a nice neat tied-with-a-pretty-bow Ending, it's an excellent end to this story.
Oh, and the railway station is King's Cross, not King's Crossing - I've caught enough trains there to be reasonably sure about that. Autocomplete tomfoolery?
| BMS chapter 1 . 5/10
Too bad I hated Inception.
| jamnaz79 chapter 1 . 5/10
It was interesting and took me off guard. Good r ad.
| Guest chapter 1 . 5/6
Some stuff was overlooked when you proofread this chapter.
It is a very good idea to have a beta or two to help out, so that your story is the best it can be, and doesn't get bogged down by sloppy errors.
"heroes", not "hero's"
"regardless of it I actually wanted"
"whether", not "it"
but he knew needed - but he knew he needed
it was grudgingly so - it was done grudgingly
take you away your - take away your
go back anywhere - go back
exactlylike - exactly like
do so - to do so
We've arrive - We've arrived
| Edelius chapter 1 . 5/7
ok, that's a nice twist, please continue.
| Ace Trainer Jessie chapter 1 . 5/5
WOW ! Simply amazing ! Tons of twists. That all add wonderully. In an insane yet logical conclusion.
| azphxbrd chapter 1 . 5/5
Great new story, looking forward to reading more of it.
| Kudou Shinichi chapter 1 . 5/5
This is amazing!