|Reviews for The Ruination of Ida - Monument Valley|
| mags chapter 1 . 7/16/2017
i'm normally christina rosales, but i'm too lazy to sign in, sorry.
this is a wonderful piece. poetry isn't my preferred literature, so i am awful at interpretation of such lit. however, i can clearly see the distinction of the voices without quotation marks and dialogue tags. i really enjoy that aspect; the ominous voice and how you drift from a question to explanation to story. it's nice. i noticed you don't have too many concrete senatory details, but surprisingly, i enjoy that too. it solidifies the detachment of the storyteller, showing his wisdom and age. overall: wonderful! thank you for writing this.