I loved this fanfic, part of me is disappointed I couldn't gotten to see the full some 5 Million 500 chapters of this story spanning all they way till Volume 9/ect, but this was a satisfying read, thank you very much, definitely one of the best Adam stories there is.

came to the comments to check if anyone else noticed, but yea, adam has one eye and a massive SDC brand over the other, its story is like, a massive part of his driving character arc and without it he's objectively less of a character

I still hope there’ll be a side story for these amazing characters

Happy one year anniversary to the conclusion of this fic! Don't know what else to include but just hopeful we get to see bits and pieces more from this universe. Cheers!

I came here off a comment on r/fnki. instant fav

I really ship Adam and Weiss

so are weiss and adam together (plz say yes they are so cute together)

Helped wrap up things in this life from a spiritual accession standpoint. I’m going back home, and staying at home. So thank you for the kickass story.

I finally found the time to finish this, and man, what a ride. Your ability to put characters through all nine circles of hell in a fight and still keep it believable that they’re able to stand in the end is seriously impressive. As an open ending to this particular story, it’s satisfying enough to me. The “Beacon” book is, after the school got blown up and drowned and torn to pieces in variations of that order, pretty decidedly shut. The Grimm black hole was insane, the airship fight spectacular in every sense of the word, and every other fight kept upping the ante long past the point I thought it had to stop. The ending is every bit the spectacle I’d expected from all the plot threads coming together. Amazing work.

I think the main question still on my mind is this: did you have further plans for Cinder’s corruption affecting Adam, or did itlike he’d hopeddissipate in time?

Damn, this story was good, I binged it all in like a few days. You really made me appreciate Adam's character a lot more. I wasn't planning on diving back into the RWBY fandom, but this story definitely made me interested in what else is out there. This was a wonderful story, you should be proud of how well it was written. I'd be interested to see how this story continues, but if this is the end, then it is a great one, and one you should be proud of. I look forward to seeing more of your work, and if not good luck with your future endeavors.

Sorry for being shameless but, you haven't read my PM, so I am assuming that you don't check them. Here's my message for ya:
Hello! I hope you receive this as soon as possible. My name is Azrael. I am messaging you with the intent of asking whether you have the chapters of your old deleted fic, Jaune Impregnated His 11 Wives. I was able to recover the 1st chapter but I can't do the same for for all. In return I can give you my gratitude and if you want I can help you with something else!

I admit, I started to read this fic years ago, desiring some quality story with Adam in it that did not drastically made him a different person like some others did. Seeing it was unfinished though, I suspected it'd never finish and dropped it like many others. Years passed, I regained an interest in rwby fics, which at this point are the only thing bringing out any quality or beauty fron RWBY to me and was absolutely mesmerized!

I think your writing is very, very good and I loved every moment of it. The humor which made things charming but did not overstay its welcome, the amazingly detailed and exciting action scenes and the interpersonal relationships and growth of each character. I am plain in love with what you wrote here, and I have no doubt had you indeed continued to make a 12 or so vol story it would have taken a decade... but it would be the greatest fanfic I ever had the pleasure of reading.

My interest in shipping certainly laid with weiss and adam, the subtle ways they grew closer yet the story never focused on romance which... made it feel very canonical for an ongoing show dare I say, at least it emulated such an authentic feel. Though I did hope for something eventually haha.

Either way, I thank you very much for writing and wish you, too, a wonderful time until the end of your days.

pretty good start.

Awesome

It was... adequate.