Reviews for Rain on a window
TaShYrEi chapter 1 . 12/2/2006
OMG...You made me cry...j/k

Aww...Aya, how could you be so stupid as to ignore Kenken's feelings! And Yohji, what a flirt, you are! j/k

Anyway, kudos to you and your story!
Damascus Ochre chapter 1 . 6/16/2004
T-T *criescriescries* THAT WAS GOOD! Loved it!

...haha, interesting how that contradicts itself. ;;

Nah, I LOVE angst. And Omi...and..."Omi understood...?"

Wonderfully written. Like I said, loved that part where Omi seems to understand-but doesn't really. *sigh* That broke my heart! *huggles fic* THAT'S WHY I LOVE IT SO MUCH! XD

Haha, anyway, props, d00d, props.

~ Kit ~
Zeto chapter 1 . 12/9/2003
I think I already reviewed this so I'll review but I won't login.
Poor Ken-ken. It's not fair! He deserves better! He's so kind and cute and innocent and naive and no one cares about him! They are so mean. Ken-ken deserves better, way better
annakas chapter 1 . 11/1/2003
Damn this was sad. I love YohjixAya pairing. But Ken is sad now. Atleast Omi was there and tried to comfort him even though it did not help.
indigoru chapter 1 . 9/21/2003
This is so sad! Aya and Youji are off in lala-land, too raveled up in their own happiness to notice poor Kenken, and Kenken's all lonely and forlorne and Omi's too naive to pick up any of the emotional undercurrants. This is very well written. Now, if you'll excuse me, I need to go get some Kleenex.
Shuichi chapter 1 . 8/11/2003
HEy~~ I love this story so far..please continue
Clara chapter 1 . 3/31/2003
aww... i love this story! angst, rain, and shounen ai? -gasp- its too good to be true! lol

anyway, nicely written; well done!
FireKat chapter 1 . 3/10/2003
poor kenken! i know just how he feels! *snif* very good fic. hope to see more- or at least one where ken really gets to cheer up _~

fyi- i used to review as :)
shime chapter 1 . 2/25/2003
That was .simple. The writing style was very simple and clean. I enjoyed it.

I especially enjoyed how Omi tried to cheer Ken up..that made me feel slightly better.

It's a wonderful piece of work. _ Looking forward to anything else you might want to share with us.
Pocky King Windy chapter 1 . 2/25/2003
Poor KenKen. ;_; I feel so bad for him. Takatori's gonna pay for this! *Stabs Takatori vehemently* Uh. sorry about that. ;

But Ken, maybe one day Aya-kun will notice him. Maybe, hopefully. ;_; In Omi-kun?

Anyway, good job in this! You write well, no da, so do more, 'kays?
Amethyst Blood chapter 1 . 2/24/2003
very nice. Almost reminded me of my sketch of ran when it's raining, also Agnst. Poor Kenken.

Ken: ::pouts::

Ran: ::glares, and stalks off; away from Ken::


- Ebony
genuinesun chapter 1 . 2/24/2003
Great! I loved this, im gonna read all your other stuff, write more!
rain chapter 1 . 2/24/2003
aw, that was so sad. ;(

Any plans on making a sequel?

A happy one this time? ;)
Mookie 821 chapter 1 . 2/24/2003
Well, I might have given Omi a bit more credit for understanding MORE than he seems to here, but in a way, it works better for the story to have him thinking in more innocent terms.

Ken's gray mood is well portrayed. His feelings toward Yohji are quite fitting, considering his own unrequited crush on Aya.