aww goku is so cute

goku is going to be a mommy

its vegeta

lol i know you worte this alone time ago but i read this two years ago and it was my first gokuxvegeta fic and i loved it so much it took me years to find this story agian but then it hit me the canddles name i was so happy i screamd you made me a gokuxvegeta fan girl thanks for opinging my eyes cuz befor the i hated the idea but its so cool now

OMG I LOVED THE STORY! I even cried! Epic story keep them up!

I have to say...Still my favorite story...

you need to keep it going it sounds unfinished

Aaaand the quotations marks are gone in this chapter :(

I'll have to see if I can continue or if it's too difficult.

I keep seeing this fic on many recommendation pages, and I have clicked on it before to read but there was always one thing that always stopped me: All of the quotation marks were missing.

I was looking at another rec page today and saw this again, so I decided to click and just see if it was still the same.

LO. AND. EFFING. BEHOLD.

QUOTATION MARKS! Everywhere! In their places! I was SO HAPPY that I could finally read this story! I have no idea if you fixed it, or if FFN fixed some coding that made them show up again, but whatever happened I appreciate it.

Some of the letters are capitalized in weird places, but it only throws me off for a minute. As long as I have quotation marks, I don't care!

I am really liking this story so far. OMG, fuck Chi Chi! Throughout the whole thing I was like "Please don't get pregnant please don't get pregnant". This world doesn't need a Gohan!

I love Vegeta's intro, and I also like the liberties you took with their ages. In canon, there's a 5 year difference, but here you've made it almost 10. It defiitely gives Vegeta an "older man" vibe to Goku's adolescence.

I really like how their relationship is progressing. How Vegeta has given him his heritage, and can explain things. I love how you bring in their heightened sense of smell. And of course, they're going to spar :D LOL.

I'm looking forward to reading the rest of this!

One of my all time favorite g/v stories

I almost didn't read your story because the last 9 chapters didn't have " so it was hard to read. Words were missing or miss spelled but I forget what words. I thought that killing the baby was so cruel and I'm going to throw explosive diapers at you! Other then those things the story was fine. GJ! Yoshi!

This was fun to start off but I had to stop here. The idea of vegeta allowing himself to be cuffed twice is just not believable, never mind them needing actually prepare to blast a bunch of ships out of the water :/ Also with saiyen power and how much of it they have including all of their senses them getting trapped just didnt make sense.

anyway. it was fun while it lasted.

this is not a flame. its a compliment to an idea almost completely well executed.

also your description of the saiyen bond was fun to read.

-Lyson

DAAAAMN. I just stayed up all night reading this! I'm sure people have told you many lovely things over the years, and I'm not even sure if you receive reviews anymore. So I'll keep it short.

CONS: SHAME ON YOU for not proofreading this! Especially to the point where quotations stopped showing up in the later chapters! I hope you remember to be more diligent in your editing now!

PROS: BEST DBZ FIC I'VE EVER READ! I love that it wasn't all smiles and that their first child died, even though it was heart-wrenching. So long and so sweet by the end. Thank you for writing this. :) You did a service to this fandom!

I guess all their children will have to enter incestuous relationships to repopulate the Saiyajin race...

This is some Splice shit going on right here.