|Reviews for Genius of the Uzumaki Clan|
| kyuubi001 chapter 1 . 10/9
nice plot,i really like this story
| Kokkoku chapter 4 . 9/2
| Sharkboybeast chapter 1 . 8/6
Haven't even started and already you bashed the uzumaki probably without meaning to.
| Senseye chapter 7 . 8/1
Keep up the good work!
| Stone Cold chapter 7 . 7/12
You need to give Naruto an upgrade power that can make him equal or better than wood style or the sharigan.
| A Fawkes Named Kurama chapter 7 . 7/12
good but not as good as my fics
| Guedt55 chapter 7 . 7/9
Love the story. I still think the senju clan head is a prick. The uzumaki ahould demand something in return for something he caused. You inteiguex mw anout mentions of the hagaromo clan. I atill thing naruto needs a something to place him at level with the future hasharama and madara. Also i would like to see more of naruto's parents.
| Guest chapter 7 . 7/9
I enjoyed this chapter especially naruto and hashirama’s battle and how he won through his cunning I cannot wait until the next chapter keep up the good work
| Strider98 chapter 7 . 7/11
Thanks for this story. Being a fanfic writer must be a thankless job and I imagine it’s frustrating at times. So thank you.
Now for the story, I must say I like it a fair bit. It’s an AU so that’s always a plus. Your OCs’ are well developed and feel like actual people which is a must if you’re gonna write an AU story like this which will doubtlessly have many new characters. I like how you’ve written children as well. They don’t fell like grown ups stuck in children’s bodies. (Except for Naruto at times, which is understandable as he’s supposed to be a genius.)
I don’t usually like reading children doing things in stories because more often than not it’s boring but you’ve done good job of making these chapters entertaining though I would like the story to pick up the pace.
There are a few things I think I have to mention in this chapter though. Firstly if you enlarge a kunai wouldn’t its sides be no longer sharp because they would be wide as its sides would enlarge proportionally. So they wouldn’t cut.
You could use it to bash people in but then again wouldn’t be as heavy as a standard kunai, so it wouldn’t be dense and Hashirama should be able to break it in two with a punch. Though you could say that the seal increases its mass as well which I’m willing to believe even though it’s against the laws of physics. Suspension of disbelief and all that.
Anyway these are small things that don’t really matter but I though I would mention it.
Hope you have good day. Thanks again.
| Rakaan chapter 1 . 7/10
It is extremely normal for a four year old child to be able to figure out how to use yo-yo after getting one for the first time and not at all some kind of sign of genius intellect. Your kid not being able to figure one out at that age would probably be cause for concern.
| danieljeji chapter 7 . 7/10
Awesome chapter. Update soon please
| Scarease chapter 7 . 7/10
| WindyCitySlayer1 chapter 7 . 7/9
Can’t wait for more
| Scaunders chapter 7 . 7/9
| elliehandesu chapter 7 . 7/9
Oh yeah damn i hope naruto learn a technique such as her dad minato techniques even thought minato is a civilian there.. that would be awesome... damn I hope those two boy would grow up as a friend and comrade.