Reviews for Promises Unbroken
Zeva Blackrose chapter 1 . 2/24/2003
I think the story should be a good one. Just one question, is Peter still a traitor?
lollygurl chapter 1 . 2/24/2003
It's great so far! Please continue! :)
Aeryn Alexander chapter 1 . 2/24/2003
The summary for this story has to be one of the best I've ever read. And the dialog is really well-written too.
273747 chapter 1 . 2/24/2003
Wow! this story was so great!

I never thought of would had happened to Sirius if they hadn't changed the Secret-Keeper. I guess he would have died :**(

That's so sad! :(

Do you think you could write what happened the night he died?

Great story :)
lelegurl9 chapter 1 . 2/24/2003
i like the start of it so far, but did you have to kill off sirius? lol
FairyTale chapter 1 . 2/24/2003
Sad. Really, really sad chapter.

I already wanted to leave again, because I didn't like the idea that you had left Sirius die. DOn't get me wrong, I don't automatically leave every fic that doesn't have him, it's just that I simply LOVE how you did Sirius in DBD.

And at least you've left that tiny little hope that he might be alive.

Anyway, I am curious where you might take this fic, what happened to Sirius, how you depict James, what about Peter - is he the traitor or not - the usual AU questions. But if you're only half as good with this than with DBD, I'm not worried, then it'll be a brilliant fic.
Mauri chapter 1 . 2/24/2003
*grabs a wad of tissues* oh, poor was good writing!
Blacke chapter 1 . 2/24/2003
This is really good. Keep up the good work.~Blacke
CokeFreak chapter 1 . 2/24/2003
Hey!

Oh sad, poor Sirius. Um so does this mean that Peter is still a spy for Voldie? Oh. I like it, can't wait for more.
Spark-Chick chapter 1 . 2/24/2003
::Stares:: Oh, this promises to be *great*! More soon? I can't wait! But hurry up and finish "Death Before Dishonor". Or else. ::Cracks whip menacingly and grins over at Snape clones::
padfoot1979 chapter 1 . 2/24/2003
Oh, gosh, I'm reading this cuz I love Death Before Dishonor, but it's super sad! I can't believe Sirius is dead! I like it though because it's a very different storyline from the ones I have been reading. Is Peter good? Hiding the fact that he is evil? Post more! :)
Jayniebop chapter 1 . 2/24/2003
this is brilliant, i cant wait to read more. please update soon
Sailor Sol chapter 1 . 2/24/2003
Oh, wow. Sad. It's good so far. I can't wait to see what happens. OMG, so I was reading your profile, and you said you go to NU, which is where I'm starting next year! What year are you in now? Omg. I'm sorry, that's just a bit bizzare. Lol. Do you have an AOL sn? I'd love to talk with you. Mine is slitaj, if you're ever on. Norwich rocks! Keep writing!
Professor Authordude chapter 1 . 2/24/2003
*sniffles* *wipes eyes* *sniffles again*
kateydidnt chapter 1 . 2/24/2003
is peter still a death eater? and nobody knows after 10 years?
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