As always your characters are as amazing as your storylines in such fanfictional tales!(not gonna lie) I just have one question: why is Subject delta fighting the locust?

You feeling better now!? I was worried after your last update for “Wolves that walk alone”!? How is the next chapter for that story coming along anyways!?

Clean house mission in cod modern warfare

you are getting better and better making this

Another banger, no surprise there. And I don’t think you weakened him at all. If anything, this just further establishes Skorge as a powerful enemy, and one of the few people that can actually give Walker an ass kicking. And a Rift Worm on Remnant would be awesome. Anyway, I’m happy you uploaded, and even if you don’t think it’s good, I still loved it.

Blaze1992. How does this sound like the end? I don't know what's going on in your mind, but this isn't the end.

So I guess we are reaching the end of this then.

No need to apologize. This chapter was great. Walker ignoring ozpin was great. The battle was horrific but epic, and revealing the badass Skorge... oh remnant is gonna burn now. Keep up the good work.

Very good chapter in my opinion, Walker feels more realistic, he is starting to really feel the weight of his loss, at least that's what I'm feeling, but anyway it's a good chapter, the length is not a problem(it's been a while since you work on it) and the road you choose to take is great!
keep up the good work and have a peacefull day.

Muchas gracias por el capitulo en serio espero con ansia cada uno de ellos.
En cuanto al capitulo me gusto mucho ya que ha aparecido de una manera mas directa el jefe enemigo pero tengo una duda estará también la reina Myrrah.

I enjoyed the chapter. As you said, the older chapters of this story feel quite different and your writing ability has certainly improved as well. I've re-read the whole story probably about 4-5 times over the year or so since I found it.

Hopefully, you might consider rewriting the story sometime in the future, just to make the work more consistent and up to your new writing skills. This is not to say the story is bad, it's not by a long shot ('heh'). I just would like to see how the older chapters would have been with the current direction of the story (e.g. the romance between BlakexRonin (no harem); the saving of Atlas only to let it die a couple of years later (hasn't yet, but expected based on the last chapter). What happened to the Grim? I get that they were weaker than Locusts, but we haven't heard of them in quite a while. I am still trying to make sense of how the Locusts are even on Remnant.

Just some of the things that pop into my head when reading this story. Either way, keep up the good work! :)

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Finally the infinite coffe cup has defeated HUZZAH

if you doing MHA fanfic maybe with crossover the darkness games or comic crossover to tryout mate.

I got so excited about a new chapter just to have my joy crushed. Plus side a new story from a great author sounds amazing so in my 27 perma-tabs you will be staying.
I'm sorry there are some many ungrateful craps who can't read your work dispite being twice as well written as many of the other fics on this entire site let alone their non-existent/crap stories.