Help, I think there might be an ocean in my room now...

I just read all of these in one sitting. They are heartbreaking and tragic and beautiful. They don't need to be any longer because the length just makes them better. My personal favourites are Peedee's, Kiki's, Peridot's and Pearl's. They show different perspectives of loss really uniquely and I felt their pain and cried their tears for them.

I've never lost anyone close to me by death (or suspected death in this case), but that doesn't mean I've never lost anyone. I really connect with these and they are just spectacular. I don't know if you plan to update this again, but if you do, I can't wait.

Ya know, I like how Lion refers to the crystal gems as the pride :)
And Steven as the cub...it's cute.

Nice job with th names. Nice job with the chapter. Nice job with the story. Nice job.

There we go

I feel really bad for Lars's parents they really miss their son

Good job, with all of these chapters. You missed a word in "Jenny," though:

"Sadie's the only who accepts."

Should be a "one" in there. Anyway, keep up the great work!

I liked the chapter!

I liked the chapter!

"Dante" researches grief counseling? Perhaps you were thinking of a future chapter there?

I can't wait for this bomb dude! :D

Bite my shiny metaal ass

Another awesome chapter please update soon

Shouldn't the Gems tell Lars' parent what happened?

Just wanted to pointmout that Peridot's chapter is just called chapter 12. I'm assuming it isn't supposed to be called that. Anyway, nice job with everything

Good job with the parents. You really are good at getting the emotions right within roughly 100 words.