Reviews for From first sight |
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Guest chapter 57 . 7/9/2017 Thanks for the lovely diversion. I've enjoyed every minute. |
Guest chapter 57 . 7/9/2017 I loved the story! Thank you! |
Soomanyfanfics chapter 57 . 7/9/2017 NOOOOOO |
hochexplosiv chapter 57 . 7/8/2017 I like the way the story jumps through both points of view and points in time. Thank you for the entertainment. |
Mel chapter 57 . 7/8/2017 I enjoyed the way each chapter was a different point in time. I think it helped that you posted so quickly though, because you really have to pay attention to little details that way, and if posting had been too spread out, it would have been harder to read and remember what'd happened. As for the story itself, I really enjoyed it. It was so original; great job. The only critique is that I would have liked to see more from the kids' perspectives, especially after everything turned out well. But I know there was more of a focus on Hermione and Severus in this story, not the kids. Maybe you could do a companion story... :D I just like your writing and would love to see more |
Mel chapter 56 . 7/8/2017 Yeah, I'm sure he was super uncomfortable about it all. |
Mel chapter 55 . 7/8/2017 Favorite part: "They'd dismissed the suit against me," he said as if he hadn't just given her a heart attack with a single word." :) A test for her? HA! |
Mel chapter 54 . 7/8/2017 Yes, I like seeing more of their realizations and discussions about being soul mates. |
Mel chapter 53 . 7/8/2017 They're both too awesome - the Ministry will need them back. |
Mel chapter 52 . 7/8/2017 I hope we get to see Severus interacting with the kids when they're little :) |
Mel chapter 51 . 7/8/2017 I'm curious about what the paper says too. |
Mel chapter 50 . 7/8/2017 Wow, that must have been hard for him. |
Mel chapter 49 . 7/8/2017 So was there or wasn't there a silencing charm? Lol |
Mel chapter 48 . 7/8/2017 Just a few minor changes to that 5 year plan, lol |
Mel chapter 47 . 7/8/2017 Loved his last line! And I like that he's the one that doesn't have a temper when it comes to the kids :) |