Reviews for Brightest In Shadow |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I can only barely remember when this story first came out and being fascinated with the concept. Reading it a seond time provided the same feeling. This is a really well written multiverse story. Hope to see more chapters. Thank you for writing! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Go Beast Boy! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Can’t tell if it was on purpose or accidental, but the formatting for the dialouge between CortanaDragon seems to be missing obvious seperation between spoken dialouge and regular sentences. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well, as someone who never watched Hellsing this section was very chaotic. Why did Walter start fighting Alucard? Where was the military? Wish it has been more detailed. |
![]() ![]() ![]() My only confusion is the lack of British military response or even the lack of first responders. It seems odd that our groups of heros are the only ones helping. No air support to even take out the zeppelins? |
![]() ![]() ![]() great read! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I didn’t notice till this read through that Beast Boy and Harry address the women in their group as girls, when LaraAlice are both supposedly older. It’s odd. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I’m lowkey mad that even with reading this a second time, the scene at the end still gets me choked up. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great job on this interesting chapter and story! |
![]() ![]() Going good but a bit hired of Worm now as it just seems to keep going, and Harry is still no where close to taking on and killing Zion who is what amounts to a Outer God. Unless you hand wave a lot away that is, even in Worm Wildbow did a lot of bending over to get that finish. Finally, how bad is Sam from Lara world? Figured by now she took herself out of life with how strongly she needed Lara after what she suffered, and we saw when they contacted home world of DC/HP that time kept on moving there so it should for Sam. |
![]() ![]() ![]() thanks for the chapter |
![]() ![]() ![]() Amazing idea and job Harry The only thing that I would mention is even in a diminished USA, I can not see a visitor being allowed to hand a folder or anything to The President of the United States Thanks and I am looking forward to more |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow. You always manage to make the chapters feel epic. I really like how Harry just straight up laid the truth at the table, makes me very curious as to how cauldron will react. Eagerly waiting for the PHO chapter, and also Cauldron's reaction to the unbound s deeds and revelations (logically they should be agreeable and maybe reach out to the unbound but I could totally see the 'incompetent cauldron' trope fitting in here and they feeling humiliated at being upstaged at their 'mission' .) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oof. If the Endbringer cultists weren't raging mad before, they certainly will be now. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love this story and style of writing. Every time I see a new chapter come out its always the first thing I read. |