Reviews for Beyond the blaze |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I love this, feeling zero sympathy for any of the wizards, even in canon the muggleborns like Hermione quickly became contemptuous of those without magic and would use it on them with no problem at all. Hoping that you will come back to this, because I would like to see Dr. Strange's reaction to her, and her helping Loki, I cheered when Hela went thru Asgard like a chainsaw through butter. More please. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was fantastic to read. I've really enjoyed everything so far. Little Alyssa is adorable and the bond she has grown between her, Tony and Bruce has absolutely melted my heart, as I'm sure she has theirs. Great writing, wonderful story, and lovely characterisations. Great work! |
![]() ![]() ![]() this is such a good story |
![]() ![]() ![]() Team Tony |
![]() ![]() This is amazing. I can't wait to see what happens next |
![]() ![]() ![]() Thank you very much for another enjoyable chapter. And I suppose I can understand Steve’s reaction to the adoption, it’s not really coming from a place of maliciousness, simply a worry and awareness that life around them is dangerous. So again, her reaction really isn’t bad either, one she’s a child, and two, she was hurt that she was saying, from what she understood, that she didn’t belong with her new family. And I rather like the ice cream scene, it’s a rather subtle way to show the distance between her and pepper slowly growing closer, even if by just a little. And I just found the story, so currently stick into this one at the moment. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Another enjoyable chapter and great Interlude. I was pretty curious about what was going on in the Wizarding world, mainly because of Alyssas potters mother figure. Not sure how I feel about her going back, as long as she can have her new family with her, that works. And sorry, don’t know much about that particular show other than it exists. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Another excellent chapter. Great solution to the adoption problem, and honestly, if pepper can handle Tony Stark, she can handle almost anyone LOL. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Another enjoyable chapter, and I liked that Tony is working hard on the concept of a family |
![]() ![]() ![]() Another entertaining chapter, and I definitely teared up at the end of the movie |
![]() ![]() ![]() Another enjoyable chapter, going to have to deal with a winter soldier now. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Another excellent and rather adorable chapter. My favorite scene is the one where she cuddled with the hulk, I just thought that was cool, and my least favorite was when she got separated from her mother figure, not because it was bad but because it was sad. My favorite is the adorable main character, least favorite is Petunia, and if it’s in regards to Civil War, team Steve, because for some reason, Tony suddenly trusts the government they had been infiltrated by Hydra, and has been known to make horrible decisions in regards to powered individuals. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Another excellent and emotional chapter. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Thank you very much for another entertaining chapter |
![]() ![]() ![]() Thank you for another really good and very entertaining chapter |