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You know, I just realized this when re-reading the fic:
Did Akaiko just commit trans-dimensional homicide?

Did she just stab some poor German salaryman who probably had just gotten a promotion and was on his way back home to his wife and kids with a senbon thrown across dimensions?

Why make shizune a couple years older? She's the same age as Kakashi
Orochimaru should find shin soon since that's how he made danzo's arm(when danzo get it is another matter)

Is this moron thinking of asking Tsunade to help research her grandfather body and how it could be grafted on childrens? Has he lost his mind?

Why tf would Root(probably) act now? Unless the mission was kidnapping mc (stupid with his connections still in the village) this encounter was dumb

He's teaching them his alphabet and doesn't think they can read his notebook?(That he was said to write incorrectly in often, which should means he was not using german but meh)
Minato can already recognize numbers(and with his IQ i don't think that's all )

Did she find fcking nazi currency? (Reichmark?) Giving a german transmigrator this is funny as hell
Also the veil between earth and he elemental nation seems flimsy as fck

Wtf did Minato take it? He's the only one near enough and he would have seen kondo or his teacher trying
Don't tell me it was a snake ? Just when dach wasn't here.. why would a gap even exist here?

Is she supposed to be his future partner? I don't like her

Mc still didn't look at his folder? I hope something goes wrong soon so he won't have a choice, his indecision is getting on my nerves

Poor gai doing mc's shop publicity for free

Why did Minato bring them here btw? I thought he would prefer making them meet kushina at his own house... it looks weird

Kakashi graduated early but is the same age as Obito/rin, he was promoted on the battlefield and when they needed genin for the third war they were all set up in the same team, then with the chunin exams being a team event he was allowed to participate with them (i don't know if this is canon, but that's how i remember it, it might have only happened in my head when i was trying to make sense of the timeline)
Btw why is gai already in his team? He should graduate at the same time as Obito, i was worried about the timeline because of him and was wondering if his dad already died

I'm surprised Obito is the first Uchiha to visit mc

If someone die in the village you should always assume danzo is responsible somehow lol

The dog stuck should look funny as hell

An entire chapter for this feels meh

Wtf? Akaiko is pressing all the wrongs buttons in my brain, why would mc not simply tell her to get the fck out? Is he just scared of ninjas? I don't like her

Are others blacksmith's chakra influencing the forging subconsciously? And so mc's feel more pure?