Reviews for Ripple Effect |
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Kai chapter 7 . 11/25 That's ... Oh, wow! ... Er, what a start into a new chapter. I mean, I'm all for carrying out the death penalty on Dumbledore. Like with Snape, Rowling tried to tell her readers that Dumbledore is one of the good guys, but if you look at what they DO, they both deserve a trip through the Veil of Death or a dementor's kiss. The systematic sabotage of auror and healer intake that Snape committed and Dumbledore covered (I trust Severus with my life, and the lives of everyone else. And I know that hundreds of thousands of those will be lost. For The Greater Good, of course!) alone deserve the death penalty for treason. Just ... going from questioning Pettigrew to executing Dumbledore is quite a jump. It's strange though, that he doesn't try and let Fawkes the enslaved phoenix save him... No ship, but Harry being friendly with Hermione and Luna opens possibilities. Possibilities I like very much. And getting Ronald out of the picture is a nice add-on. :-) Nice story, nice ending! |
melissa52080 chapter 7 . 6/11 Great story. Would have loved to have actually seen Dumbledore's trial. |
Sleepyhawk502 chapter 7 . 6/10 Oh I love this story. Thank you so much for sharing! |
Linda chapter 7 . 12/1/2023 Loved the story |
Guest chapter 7 . 11/29/2023 that was disgusting writing right there hated it thanks |
Guest chapter 7 . 6/16/2023 I really enjoyed it thanks for writing |
missgsmith51 chapter 7 . 5/19/2023 Thanks for a great story that brings a HEA to characters who rarely get one. |
missgsmith51 chapter 6 . 5/19/2023 “I am getting tired of people nagging at me in PM that those events are not canon …” I can only conclude that some folks don’t really understand all of the purposes of fanfiction. Besides entertainment, some folks use it to fill plot holes and explain things that just don’t make sense to them. As you have said, if readers do not like your explanations, they should just move on. I didn’t see any armed guards pop into existence to force me or anyone else to read these stories. “Don’t like, don’t read,” you said. Really … how much clearer does a direction or caution need to be? Since I actually LIKE Sirius, I shall continue to read with relish! |
IMcKenzie3197 chapter 7 . 4/25/2023 What a wonderful story! Thank you for taking the time to write and publish it. I am really impressed with your imagination in how you twisted "canon" into something better than the original: Dumb-as-a-door being evil is quite believable. The power of house elves is usually ignored. A big black dog being a capable dog father. Absolutely genius! Thank you again, Iain (There is a great story by Catsarecool, that if you haven't already read, I think that you would really like.) |
kikistimi chapter 7 . 12/28/2022 This was so cool! I loved it. Thank you for sharing your awesome work! |
Ellie J chapter 7 . 11/9/2022 Your story is so brilliant! I love how sirius killed Voldemort with the help of the house elves, that's so cool and I don't think it's been done before. I love the elves in your story. This has been a really enjoyable, fun read. |
Ellie J chapter 6 . 11/9/2022 I really love your story and I love how you handled the thing about Sirius teling Snape about Moony. That never made any darn sense to me either, sirius was so loyal to his friends and he wouldn't have told Snape of all people a secret that big. Sirius could be wreckless, but if Remus had killed Snape, he would have probably been tossed in Azkaban if not killed, and Sirius would have known that. If he and the others went through the difficult process of becoming animagi to help remus, he wouldn't have told an enemy something likely to get Remus in very serious trouble, not to mention how bad Remus would feel if he killed or turned Snape. |
Daemoniorum chapter 7 . 9/23/2022 Loving this story. Though I would have been curious as to the reaction of Malfoy now that his father has presumably been retried. |
Guest chapter 7 . 9/21/2022 This is so sweet! |
Nika Yami chapter 5 . 8/26/2022 Wow I loved the questioning. Also loving the Dumbledore bashing/criticism! Anyway, I am confused about the vaults. I don't think victims get access to criminals' money after they are arrested. That sounds dubious and opens a can of worms. |