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Usagi of Feudal Moon Era chapter 6 . 2/11/2005
you have an interesting idea and it's a cute story but you need to go back, do some editing and break up the big paragraphs when different people talk. it will make it alot less confusing.
ShadowicShinobi chapter 1 . 4/30/2004
it was short, yet it enraptured me. I loved it begginning to end.
(please read my Inuyasha fic called the elemental brothers.)
Millie M. Banshee chapter 5 . 11/29/2003
I like this story but you need to go back threw it and brake stuff up into pharaghaphs plz! it makes things easer to read! Buh BYe!
Sailor Neko chapter 5 . 5/3/2003
Great Fanfic! UPDATE SOON! I have RAMEN! *giggles and holds it out*