|Reviews for Shards of Sadness|
| 00ravenclaw00 chapter 2 . 6/18
You need to keep going with this!
It is so well written, and the emotions jasmine felt I could feel myself. It is so beautiful and i just wanted to keep reading
| Freida Right chapter 2 . 7/23/2017
There's just one thing, easily fixableyou might like to add a header at the very top with the chapter number and title. Or you may not, since it is displayed at the very top of the page, but I find it helps to flow and look if the chapter.
| Freida Right chapter 1 . 7/23/2017
You did the thing! It looks great!