Reviews for The Original Origin
Vazeroth chapter 3 . 10/6/2023
A shame really theres so much he can do with the first due to it's ability to create literally anything from nothing. I mean he could think a lightning bolt at someone or a storm of blades. Hell he could just summon a meteor into existence or create a sword that embodies the concept of death. The whole idea behind Denial Of Nothingness is that it can truly create anything from pure nothing, be that physical, mental, spiritual , metaphysical or even conceptual.
Anonymous chapter 6 . 10/8/2021
Please continue.
Jacks-Noah chapter 1 . 7/23/2021
Update All!
RaidenBaalMei chapter 2 . 5/29/2021
LoL 'The Money Printer'
N2 chapter 6 . 3/2/2021
Please continue I am looking forward to more.
N2 chapter 6 . 3/2/2021
Please continue.
ChiDead chapter 6 . 2/22/2021
Only wish there is more
Divine Blizzard chapter 6 . 1/5/2021
This is an interesting story. Hope its still continuing
ArcheMage chapter 1 . 12/2/2020
Sorry to nitpick, but canon shirou's projection aren't temporary, in fact they're more likely to be permanent. In a conversation with Rin, he told her that the hollow projections that he made in his shed lasted for months. It's only when he dismisses them or rushes their creation, or get heavily damaged that they vanish.
Kaustrios chapter 4 . 11/24/2020
Welp shorou is getting stronger with all these Noble phantasm especially with karna Kavacha & Kundala and his vasvavi Shakti

And yeah while heroic spirit cofirm human history and reinforce it dead apostles deny it and Noble phantasm are a proof of human history so if a human used a Noble Phantasm on a dead apostles he can turn back time to put his body back in the original state tho this doesn't work with heroic spirit and gods
KPmine1 chapter 6 . 9/4/2020
Nice can’t wait for the next one
gerahdz.sanchez chapter 1 . 7/25/2020
Very interesting and amazing story.
Absolute Evil-Rozen chapter 6 . 3/6/2020
i wonder what shirou's reaction to jack will be? should be interesting
jameswillow.jam chapter 3 . 2/14/2020
that a hellsing abridged reference
stormsyaf chapter 6 . 10/28/2019
You are a hidden gem. Why are you stories not getting all the likes is beyond me. This is the first shirou who used the first magic. I didn't even know about his first origin before the fuyuki fire. Hope you continue and please shirou x jeanne
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