Reviews for Wings of the Forsaken |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Ok loven this story and hope for more please more. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Seems interesting even though it will probably never be finished. i will put it on the following section just in case. |
![]() ![]() ![]() please update immediately |
![]() ![]() ![]() please update immediately |
![]() ![]() Being honest, the Professor Snape was right about James Potter; a petulant, prideful, arrogant, cocky and shitty person that likes to bullies others for thinks that he is above everyone else. Even James isn't above to bullies unprovoked other people that don't even gives him a reason to pester them. Seriously, i even feels pity by Snape for had to deals with James during his time as student in Hogwarts, especially as Potter caused that Snape lost the control and accidentally insulted Lily, sundering his friendship with her in the progress. Well, i would likes to see Harry and his true family teaching this bully of James Potter to not mess with them, and that he cannot get away only for be a petulant and popular rich boy, James must learns that he isn't above from others, in fact, he is actually an insect that only deserves the shit of others. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Update? So much potwntial here, and looking forward to seeing where this story goes |
![]() ![]() ![]() I do hope you come back and finish this one day. |
![]() ![]() ![]() nope, darker forces are at work here. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Matsu in physical combat is useless but in informal warfare the lady is useless, and Wizards in general despise Muggle technology. |
![]() ![]() ![]() The Sekirei of Harry are okay but lacking in power compared to Mutsubi who wins the tournament in canon. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I am surprised that Karasuba is a actual ally because Miya is a mortal enemy especially after what happened between them. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Miya is a person that is wrong to anger tell this to Karasuba the woman is damn scary, and she is ruthless to the point of making people show fear. |
![]() ![]() ![]() The Wizards personally would be interested on the Sekireis they are nothing like Muggles their power sets them apart. James Potter is a idiot insulting Miya a lady that can cut a battleship in half with no trouble the fellow has a death wish. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Dude and Dudette and Dey if you read this with out reading the first chapter you are gonna say WTF on the plot like I did |
![]() ![]() ![]() Interesting. It is not a long story, as almost a third to half is notes. You were warned about it at the start. It is one reason I'm writing on AO3 as it only counts the story, not the notes! But I like the story per se. |