Reviews for Wings of the Forsaken
LordNemesis chapter 15 . 8/20
Ok loven this story and hope for more please more.
jimmy.oz chapter 2 . 3/2
Seems interesting even though it will probably never be finished. i will put it on the following section just in case.
thomaspheasant chapter 15 . 12/3/2022
please update immediately
thomaspheasant chapter 15 . 12/3/2022
please update immediately
Guest chapter 6 . 1/25/2022
Being honest, the Professor Snape was right about James Potter; a petulant, prideful, arrogant, cocky and shitty person that likes to bullies others for thinks that he is above everyone else. Even James isn't above to bullies unprovoked other people that don't even gives him a reason to pester them.

Seriously, i even feels pity by Snape for had to deals with James during his time as student in Hogwarts, especially as Potter caused that Snape lost the control and accidentally insulted Lily, sundering his friendship with her in the progress.

Well, i would likes to see Harry and his true family teaching this bully of James Potter to not mess with them, and that he cannot get away only for be a petulant and popular rich boy, James must learns that he isn't above from others, in fact, he is actually an insect that only deserves the shit of others.
Lord Damon Darkfyre chapter 15 . 12/14/2021
Update? So much potwntial here, and looking forward to seeing where this story goes
HairyLimey chapter 15 . 11/28/2021
I do hope you come back and finish this one day.
Planar-Walking-Entertainment chapter 15 . 5/13/2021
nope, darker forces are at work here.
Jose19 chapter 12 . 4/10/2021
Matsu in physical combat is useless but in informal warfare the lady is useless, and Wizards in general despise Muggle technology.
Jose19 chapter 8 . 4/10/2021
The Sekirei of Harry are okay but lacking in power compared to Mutsubi who wins the tournament in canon.
Jose19 chapter 7 . 4/10/2021
I am surprised that Karasuba is a actual ally because Miya is a mortal enemy especially after what happened between them.
Jose19 chapter 6 . 4/10/2021
Miya is a person that is wrong to anger tell this to Karasuba the woman is damn scary, and she is ruthless to the point of making people show fear.
Jose19 chapter 5 . 4/10/2021
The Wizards personally would be interested on the Sekireis they are nothing like Muggles their power sets them apart.

James Potter is a idiot insulting Miya a lady that can cut a battleship in half with no trouble the fellow has a death wish.
flip flip2 electric bogaloo chapter 1 . 3/24/2021
Dude and Dudette and Dey if you read this with out reading the first chapter you are gonna say WTF on the plot like I did
EdTheBeast chapter 15 . 10/12/2020
Interesting. It is not a long story, as almost a third to half is notes. You were warned about it at the start. It is one reason I'm writing on AO3 as it only counts the story, not the notes! But I like the story per se.
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