Reviews for Charming
Markus Ramikin chapter 39 . 2/13
Story's not bad at all. Good command of language, character voices seem about right... it's just too bad the characters are such idiots, lacking the sort ability to see the obvious that you and I have.
Guest chapter 4 . 10/31/2016
If Ron is 6 months older than Hermione, and Harry I'd 10 months younger than Hermione, there's no way Harry and Ron would be in the same year at school, might need to change that part.
Guest chapter 39 . 5/25/2016
Except for the rushed last chapter - I quite enjoyed the story. I did feel bad for Draco as Hermione did use him and treat him badly. Wished he had a better and happier ending
Neko-Tenchi chapter 17 . 2/24/2015
As much as i love the Harry/Hermioness, I hope Hermione lets Draco down easy. I feel bad for him since he seems to really like her
Neko-Tenchi chapter 15 . 2/24/2015
Let there be smut! :D Brillant confession
Neko-Tenchi chapter 14 . 2/24/2015
Seriously , can they get any more messed up. Im with ron on this one, someone needs to strangle thres two idiots.
Neko-Tenchi chapter 13 . 2/24/2015
Awe, Poor Draco, but using him as an excuse isnt nice Hermione, and it will only end in tears and a lot of yelling, trust me, ive been there done that
Neko-Tenchi chapter 12 . 2/24/2015
:( Missed the date with draco, but love how Harry's starting to realise he needs to get his hear out of his arse with hermione before Draco sweeps her off her feet
Neko-Tenchi chapter 11 . 2/24/2015
YES! As much as i love harry, my as long as draco's not attacted and interested my heart wil always lean towards dramione as my OTP. Course i know hermione's gonna end up with harry eventually, so im just enjoying my Dramione goodness while i can
Neko-Tenchi chapter 10 . 2/24/2015
I want her to get together with Draco, he's so obviously into her
Neko-Tenchi chapter 2 . 2/24/2015
I just realised that on the tabs, your chaters come out loing ike 'charming chapter to', 'charming chapter three', like youre caling th chapters charmng. made me grin
Guest chapter 39 . 12/11/2014
So, for some reason, this story is listed in a Dramione community, but I didn't notice, and started reading anyway.

Interesting plot idea, and I liked the story as a whole, but the last chapter didn't do the rest of your story justice. I think that there should have been a clear explanation as to what happened regarding the charm, as it's not clear in what you did write.
hhrforever chapter 39 . 12/10/2014
I loved this story. It was a very interesting plot. The characters were great. It felt like it was missing a bit from the last chapter to this one but it was great overall
bellachaos chapter 26 . 12/10/2014
I've really enjoyed this story and think you've done a wonderful job of keeping the characters believable and "in-character". I feel like the plot is starting to drag a little bit but I wanted to let you know how much I like this story before I stop reading.
luckintheair04 chapter 39 . 7/14/2014
This was a good story. I remember reading this halfway through ages ago but I stopped because I shipped Dramione AND Harmony and these kinds of love triangles are really frustrating. But I loved Harry's and Hermione's relationship. Thought Harry was a bit clingy but he has insecurities so it's evident. I adored Ron, found him really funny (Especially the part where he's not ready to be a godfather xD ) It's nice to see a decent Ron for a change. I feel sorry for Malfoy and I think Hermione was a bit harsh to him, though I agree Malfoy needed to get a hint that Hermione wasn't interested AT ALL.
Anyway, great story!
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