Why did you even bother if you can't finish? What a waste of time.

Greetings. I want to say that of what I have read of your story, I like it so far. I do however feel bad for Sarah and everything she has gone through. I like Jareth to be rather dark, and if she is to be raped, it should be by him and him alone. Not that she should really be getting raped in either case. But as I am getting into the story, it just ends. Unfinished. Dare I say, I really hate it when that happens. I thought you were planning on doing more chapters. I see that it has been years since posting this, so there is little hope of it ever being completed. But should the day arise that you do plan on completing this story, I hope to be able to read it.

You bitch. You made me cry.

I know this has been completed and I am not finished reading this yet but I thought I would make this comment. Okay, two comments.

First, I am enjoying this story immensley and I hope it has not been totally abandoned.

Second, I have a little insight into the world of corset trained women. When there was no chambermaid to lace up one's corset, you could do it up yourself by means of a small hook in the wall. Grab the laces which were very long, hook the laces on the wall and pull then pull the excess out by the laces ends, I am not sure how they tied the corsets off but that is how they tightened them anyway. Hope that little tidbit interested you. :)

Oh you so can not leave this story here that is just so not fair. I know that ou haven't updated in so long but please finish this story.

finish the story please

loved it

good

grea ch

loved it

good ch

SUCH A SWEET CH

NOW WHAT

now whAT

loved it