Reviews for Harry Potter: Lost Very Far Away
Hikari Nova chapter 3 . 5/28/2017
nice chapter and lol at the cliff hanger
ImaginativeFury chapter 3 . 5/28/2017
Okay so what is the deal with Harry before using the Avada spell for killings the things?

I dont understand all that crap about disgust or other shit he talked about?

Is he so stupid to feel sad about killing some beast?
Guest chapter 1 . 5/23/2017
This story will be infinatly better if Harry doesn't even try to get home, no one care what happenes there anyway.
Pietro99 chapter 2 . 5/23/2017
A very interesting concept, very original as far as I can see. Much potential and well articulated, so well done and keep going. Still a lot of errors, although it is still readable, e.g " ... the damage was quite intensive, it almost kill you." instead of, " ... the damage was quite extensive, it almost killed you." A beta would serve you well.
AnFan-n-More chapter 2 . 5/23/2017
I think I know what story you got the blood bag idea from. I think it might be "Core Threads" by theaceoffire. Or, it could be that theaceoffire got the idea from the same place you did. Good story by the way, worth a read.

I like what I've read so far. Hope to see more.
anja.quickert.9 chapter 2 . 5/22/2017
:-)
ImaginativeFury chapter 1 . 5/22/2017
Did you just write the word comma several times instead of using the symbol?
anja.quickert.9 chapter 1 . 5/21/2017
:-)
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