What the absolute fuckery was this? I am not sure if the author is stupid, the description of the fighter location was bad or we got some shortstick smoothbrain MC?
From what I saw he was behind some rocks, something solid that protected him and then he...he stood up? He cast shield charm, using most of his remaining strength for it and then he just...kept standing there, sustaining the shield until he basically dropped and would have died? I don't understand, he just stood there.
Don't wands shoot by pointing direction, they dont work around edges like a gun? wth is happening.
Am I to tired and I missed something and just went apeshit?

Damn, we got ourselves a genius! I mean, I should have known not to expect much when he walked through the veil but I assumed that's just for plot but damn, he is dumb. His talk with that people sounded like he lacks higher brain function, his performance in the "dungeon" was cring worthy, of all the spells going for the AK off the bat, I am not sure if the Author did a good job at showing how utterly stupid HP is or its just the author, he went with AK because its "cool" and then reacting to the Rodians...please have the clone be:
1. An empty body to move is consciousness. ffs dont be an actual thinking body, you know what happens to an older outdated model?!
2. Make the clone intellectually capable, functioning brain. All that. Smarter, better, stronger.

Potter's Triumph... a speeder named Potter's Triumph... that's slick right there! Make it an early model motorcycle and it would still be the perfect name!

We are meant to think that they would let him back into the room with the Veil of Death...

I know they are stupid but not that stupid and he knows that it is called the Veil of death and he has heard the prophecy so knows that leaving would be the end of the world...

you know of course he could have saved them all by knocking them out a day or two before their deaths taking an imprint of their minds and cloned them new bodys like minnie the droid said couldnt be done for sirius becouse he was brain dead before a scan could be done, just a thought though, realy good story thank you.

A fabulous story that I have thoroughly enjoyed. It was a true epic and it was great to see how you wrapped it all up. I really like both your Harry and Luna and I liked how you allowed them to grow and change away from the magical world. I also liked the numerous little ( and not so little) changes to canon you made. I particularly liked the feud with Yoda and the Jedi and what Harry created with the introduction of the Commonwealth. If I have one very minor quibble it is that I would have liked a bit more world building. There were so many glimpses of interesting ideas and elements of political intrigue that I would have liked to see fleshed out but I realise that would make the story even bigger and may have made it too unwieldy. Thank you again for sharing your writing and ideas.

This is an amazing story and I am really enjoying how you have challenged Harry with so many different events and scenarios. I did struggle a bit with some of the SW references but that is a minor point in the grand sweep of this tale. Thank you for sharing your ideas and writing

I enjoyed most of this story but now it kind of doesnt feel that enjoyable anymore.

Love the story! Thank you. But it does hit a certain point where you can argue that its too long or drags on and it should have ended sooner. The sometimes limitations our heroes have out of nowhere always felt force just to have the moment of conflict and stress. The lack of foresight, intelligence or suspicion in some scenarios also grated a bit, like with Hermione.

But all in all I like the story and looking forward to more from you. Also I really LOVE your other story.

Loved it!

It started well. Then it went straight into a pile of shit so big it collapsed on itself and became a black HOLE. Shame.

as critical as i was about the last chapter, i loved the interactions and internal thoughts of both harry and luna. very well done!

wow. i don't know what i should feel about this chapter. harry half-asses some of the most important things he wants to do and then he just shrugs his shoulders and says "time is a bitch and wouldn't let me do it". really, with the amateurish way he failed, he should look much closer to home for why things didn't work out as he wanted.

is this an indication that - as powerful and experienced as he has grown to be - harry will be as inept in this story as he was in canon? only to be saved by being led around the nose and letting others do the work? he had such promise in the earlier chapters and then ... this.

Damn, he's really become twisted. It takes a special sort of sick to murder a person and then act all chummy with someone that can basically be considered their child. In a way this harry is worse than voldemort.

What a shame. Looked promising at the start though. But now it's just...