Reviews for Harry Potter: Lost Very Far Away |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Why just why. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Vary glade I have found this vary good story that as soon as I read the opening blurb I couldn’t help but not binge read it like a fat kid at the end of a chocolate cake factory’s conveyor belt line |
![]() ![]() ![]() LOL I spoke too soon, it's only Hermione's death I don't like, now I know why it felt as if you forced Harry's and Luna's deaths... Not going to say more, no need to spoil the story for new readers who read reviews... Thanks for writing. XD |
![]() ![]() ![]() Earlier you said every Commonwealth ship had a secret compartment hidden by magic, containing spare bodies of Harry and Luna... Are you implying every ship they have was compromised without notice? When spies etc get noticed instantly? For that matter, how was the compartments discovered and accessed by non magic users? Feels like you wanted to end the story and decided to kill them off... Other than the end and the death of Hermione, awesome story, well done. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Also, you're really going to let Hermione's parents believe she died as a traitor and murderer? I'll probably give this story one more chapter, but what started out as great is turning into mud... |
![]() ![]() ![]() You let Hermione die needlessly... ALL Commonwealth ships have a compartment that has clones of Harry and Luna... They could simply have put Hermione in cryo until they had time to fix her... |
![]() ![]() ![]() It was the body that fought his master that lost a hand, not this one, so why attach an arm? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Umm if Harry wasn't good at the form he used, why not use Juyo or what you called it... He was good enough to wipe out a jedi temple with that... If you learn skills you USE them lol... |
![]() ![]() It's a good story but did you need to make harry such a soy boy virgin, he seems to be creepily fixated on luna, it's been what decades? They were "dating" for what a minute before he left, And he's shown no interest in women, it's just plain weird. |
![]() ![]() ![]() sadly Darth Ruin is actually from 2000BBY, i think the sith lord you meant was Darth Rampage. similar name but from the appropriate time period of around 1000-900BBY. also Darth Ruin predate Darth Bane and the Rule of Two, so again, wrong sith lord. just an FYI and as always thank you for your time. |
![]() ![]() This was such a neat story, then 2/3 of the way through, it turns to absolute schlock. |
![]() ![]() ![]() excellent. simply excellent. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well, that's different. Luna comes up with the most off the wall stuff and still manages to hit the nail head. Wonder what she packed expecting Harry's need. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well done, mate. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Good start. |