Well, that's different. Luna comes up with the most off the wall stuff and still manages to hit the nail head. Wonder what she packed expecting Harry's need.

Well done, mate.

Good start.

eighty years waiting for Luna, a vigin not wetting his dick, unbelievable. she better appreciate that, and quite irresponsible of him, the emergency beacon he gave the girl when hekk died and he left the order could have been used and he would just sleep? what about just calling his friends on the holo from time to time.
and missed the opportunity to make Harry be nicholas flamel friend. Nicholas still being Young and not immortal! he could've even learned alchemy alongside him

I had to plink a tear away also Harry not knowing is probly worse.

Wow this chapter really was BAD... idk how Harry went from massacring a lesser version of Jedi order in weaker body and incomplete Sith training to getting slapped unconcious like a bitch by his own droid after living as a Jedi for 20 years.

An intensely MUST READ story for any HP/SW fans! A great love story with both good and evil, darkness and light. But remember most people are in a type of balance. No one wants to be evil, most wish that they were only good, but a good balance would bring the most happiness to the most people. It is like freedom versus security. To much of one can destroy the other.

that definitly ended better than i thought despite the not so appealing start, aswell as my misunderstanding. I thought he traveled to the clone wars era, but that wasnt the case, so i take back my review of that (sadly we cant delete reviews).

Well thought out, good grammar and plot but a bit too much info dump at times. All in all, a good story.

A Force clone? Have you ever played the force unleashed or even looked into that for the matter? Force users are almost impossible to clone without it going wrong, no force connection, a dying force connection (and subsequent death) or malformation...

Lightsabers are worth around 50.000 credits...

what? its some 750 years to early for the clones to even be created... you say we are a at 795 BBY and not 23/24 BBY, get your time right.

So we got an rather magic useless harry, how great.

Review:
Ok I don’t really know how to feel about this novel. On one hand, it’s a good story and wraps up nicely in the end; on the other, it’s about 75-100k words too long imo.

To put it bluntly, the novel is a slog to push through and finish. To many times the author goes off explaining perspectives and details that don’t matter and I just didn’t care about. I usually listen to ff novels through tts, but especially for the last 10 or so chapters I just had to skim read to get through it all.

While the ending is satisfying, it just took too long to get there. So overall, I’d give this fic a 6.5/10.

The over explanation of the bad guys character is just way too much word vomit. It’s always been poor in this novel but it now it just feels like useless filler.

Also, I feel like the author is trying way to push the bashing. Not that I dislike the bashing, but it’s just too much. The author just straight up made them blatantly evil and overly arrogant to the extreme. HP has also been pretty nerfed just to make the Earth arc last longer than needed. It’s just like, we get it, can we move on now?

Ok review time…
This is a story I would recommend to anyone who finds it…

It starts really slow and to me at least it was very aggravating to read but I believe that if you keep reading it eventually becomes great

I do have only one thing I disliked (the rest get fixed as you read)about this story though…

And it goes like this In the story eventually a villain comes to hurt Harry and does so because of the something that he did in the past…

Us readers will have at that point read through all of Harry’s life. only we never read about the villain or anything so the villain feels like they came from nowhere instead of some cool villain that Harry created on accident.

Thanks,
OldWinterFang