Reviews for What Have We Done?
N7 Greek-Valkyrie chapter 1 . 3/8/2023
You should really change the label so people know this is a Bella/Edward fiction. So when we sort stories to omit him, we don't end up with him as the love interest.
VryUnique chapter 75 . 3/3/2023
Awesome story!
Kate? Wow! That was a twist. Poor Garrett, but picking Tanya seemed a bit creepy.
Thanks so much for sharing!
VryUnique chapter 74 . 3/2/2023
Bittersweet…
VryUnique chapter 73 . 2/27/2023
Bella should understand the insecurity because she suffers from the same ailment.
Where she finds Edward’s insecurity hard to believe because she feels Edward is perfect
she needs to realize he feels the exact same way about her.
VryUnique chapter 72 . 2/26/2023
That was intense.
I still think Charlie is overreacting but he is overwrought because of what Bella has been through.
I also think he wouldn’t even be that mad at the Cullens if their leaving never affected Bella.
He would have reacted to the same exact actions differently based on how they affected Bella.
VryUnique chapter 71 . 2/26/2023
I keep laminating on the fact that they are teenagers who broke up and Charlie
is overreacting but this chapter definitely made me see it more in his pov.
The Cullens did take Bella into their home and treat her like family and then
cut her out of their lives when the kids broke up, that was inexcusable.
I still don’t think Charlie should be crucifying Edward the way he is,
he is still a teenager who moved with his parents and you can’t really
blame him for not keeping in touch with his ex.
VryUnique chapter 70 . 2/26/2023
I still think they are all blowing up 2 teenagers breaking up.
They moved and their teenage son moved with them, it is
not their fault or Edward’s fault how Bella handled the breakup.
We know there is more to it but Charlie doesn’t know that.
I also have questions about the covenant. A mated pair can make
a decision and you can’t go against them. A mated pair did not
make the decision for them to leave, Edward made that decision by
himself so that shouldn’t have fallen under the covenant rules.
VryUnique chapter 69 . 2/26/2023
They all should sit down, there seems like so much to say.
Bella should know what Carlisle told Edward. I could totally
see Carlisle point, why he let Edward leave.
VryUnique chapter 68 . 2/26/2023
Everything on the table….. emotional.
VryUnique chapter 67 . 2/26/2023
Alice probably should have stayed hidden until it was her turn.
VryUnique chapter 66 . 2/26/2023
Yah!
VryUnique chapter 65 . 2/26/2023
Awesome progress. Edward needs this healing.
VryUnique chapter 60 . 2/26/2023
So I guess this can either be a panic attack or Bella’s recent bad health could
have affected her heart.
VryUnique chapter 59 . 2/26/2023
I guess Bella needs some time to calm down.
VryUnique chapter 58 . 2/26/2023
Go Bella! He deserves it but I still feel bad for him.
I was thinking he should have hunted first but maybe it was
good for Bella to see his pain.
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