|Reviews for Misty Dreams|
| my chapter 27 . 10/3
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| Kittyangel chapter 27 . 6/14
So I'm pretty sure I read this years ago, but I stumbled across it again yesterday... yes yesterday... I completely binge read this entire fic. My eyes are red, I have a crick in my neck, and I'm pretty sure I haven't eaten anything yet haha! But I wouldn't change it.
Things I liked:
I really liked how you really built up their relationship. I also liked how you made Syaoran cold but not a complete (excuse the word) dick. I have tried to read your other story "Jagged Amber", but I can never finish it because I HATE how he treats Sakura.
You had lots of good twists, and turns that keeps the reader fascinated. It definitely was never boring. There are some stories where I will scroll through some parts out of boredom, but I never had to do that once.
Also, I loved their love story. When he asked her to marry him I was on the edge of my seat. Every time he would protect her my heart would melt. I just sincerely wish that they could have said "I love you". I know you were probably going for a Star Wars thing, but I just wish they could have said it.
Things to Improve Upon:
Lots of grammar mistakes but who doesn't have those.
There was a couple of times when I was sincerely confused between Yukito and Yamazaki. I think they were all meant to be Yamazaki, but I'm not for sure. There were a couple of scenes where I just gave up trying to decide who it was supposed to be.
All in all, fantastic read, great story, and brilliant writing. I very much enjoyed it. And now to have some food and get some sleep haha!
| alex subcultural chapter 27 . 5/6
One of the best fanfictions yet! Great story, well put together, well thought out, great delivery, and i loved how you built their emotions, rather than having them make out in the first chapter. This is exactly what i was looking for in fan fiction. I am looking forward to many more adventures with you!
| Kaycera chapter 27 . 3/12
I ran across this story by chance while trying to find something I had read before. And I thought, I'm familiar with some of the character names, what is this about?
I loved your story. :) I just had to post something to you. Awesome job! Keep up the creative flow & lots of luck in the future. You have a great talent.
| acomplicatedlemon chapter 9 . 11/23/2014
I noticed something. You might want to reread chapters 8 through 10. There are several moments when Tomoyo calls Sakura "Sakura" instead of Keili. But then calls her Keili again. I don't know if its intentional but it is a bit confusing. I love your story so far I can't to keep reading and find out more!
| animegirl73 chapter 27 . 10/3/2014
Just finished story and I loved it
| TeddyBearStuffings chapter 4 . 9/24/2014
oooooooh i understand this now!
i used to read this story a lot when i was little... it was actually one of my bedtime stories when i was little.
| animefangurlcraz chapter 27 . 9/19/2014
Beautifully written; magnificent struggles; perfection. FANTASTIC JOB!
| Food chapter 1 . 9/1/2014
| GreenDrkness chapter 27 . 9/1/2014
I feel that there should be more but I know there won't be sigh
Some of this story made want to throw my computer(thank Merlin I didn't I would have been out a computer) But overall I loved the story
Keep on the writes
| readytostart chapter 27 . 7/8/2014
This story was completed a long time ago, but I still wanted to take the time to thank you for it! It was very entertaining and, well, magical. Thank you so much for taking the time and effort to write it!
| Akanksha chapter 27 . 6/25/2014
hey i just read this story...
at start...past n present was lil confusing...
but then how u showed everything..
how much she went thru..the pain...those filthy comments... and so much more..but she cud never speak...
and even without speaking... she made 2 lovely friends... tomoyo n eriol... she saved there son' life...
and the sparks which syaoran n sakura had.. oh my god... i loved that transformation...from enemies to love... that emotion unknown to them..but the sparks...everything pulling them closer to each other...
chap 18...where he asked her to marry..by god i almost had my heart in my mouth... and this last chapter... where they finally became one... 3
girl u r super talented... it was my first CCS fanfic n i'm already in love with it...
| Aly chapter 14 . 5/29/2014
Don't know if anyone else already made a comment about it, but in one line you said she talked soothingly to kero.
| Nazrath chapter 27 . 1/24/2014
| moon730 chapter 24 . 1/11/2014