cool idea, but super cringey dialogue. i dont think its for me.

meh, the slap ruined the immersion, along with the everything is harrys fault thing with everyone else being the root cause. So I read the comments. It seems like it doesn't change. Its quite a good read, but I'm dropping, however, I might come back.

The slap thing is a tired trope. I hope harry doesn't trust hermione for a long time now. I wouldn't
Then there is the girls trying to help thing. Everyone who is trying to help is actually doing the opposite of it. The girls get the healer involved, that gets the DMLE involved, all of which is adding stress. Which gets the Mind healer involved, who is pushing too fast. I don't actually think that guy is a mind healer at all, he is actively sabotaging harry. The girls know he needs space, but keep trying to shove themselves in his face, they know that is the current problem because he has told them as such. Then when they get angry at him they do the exact same thing to him by cutting off the bond. Funny how harry is better at it than they are. Also the black out thing is another shitty trope, have him beat the shit out of malfoy instead. They actually have real beef. Could have had him taunt him about the mind healer with a crowd. It then solves 2 purposes. Make malfoy get some, and push the narrative your going for.
The relationship is very unequal too. They do whatever they want and harry is harrassed. They don't respect him at all.

Finally the Matron actually does something useful

Holy shit that was a shocking intro.

A question more than a review, is this story complete, or are any of your stories complete? I love reading your work, but somehow expect the final finis. Thank you tazdad47

Don't stop now! Down a can of redbull and get writing!

evil old man playing god

This really is a fantastic story, i love it! I hope you are well and that i get to read more of it soon! :)

This story is really well written and I've been really enjoying it, but it's just hitting my biggest peeve way too hard.

It's so common in these kind of polycule relationships with a lot of writers where the non-Harry members of the polycule feel great for each other, and Harry feels like the odd one out. The girls have a stable and romantic basis for a relationship and Harry is struggling and groveling to fit in. This whole emotional snap arc was great, but I already see how it's being handled and hate it. The girls can do no wrong, and even when they do it's minor and gotten over quickly (or Harry is over reacting), while Harry gets the silent treatment and 'punished' for his mistakes. I've seen it so many times and every time it feels wrong. My childhood was pretty damn close to what this fic implies Daphne's was like, and I can guarantee you if I was Harry I'd be getting out of that relationship as fast as I could. His trauma is only superficially considered and functionally trivialized by every single person so far even the healers so far and it bothers me.

Dropping this fic for now. Might come back later, but unlikely.

Hope the story continues, I’ve loved it so far

A great story so far however i have yet to hear a young British lad to use God's name in vain, its more I'm xorry to say an American bad habit, You are a learned writer and I hope you will not be offended by my remark, Remember the first commandment my good author, God bless you,

incompletemy downvote its really good otherwise despite the tropes especially the ancient and most noble houses trope which i fucking hate, this was readable

Enjoying the story so far. Looking forward to seeing how bond continues to progress

ive read this story before but god damn i forgot just how over dramatic and ridiculous harry is. he jumps to ridiculous conclusions without even hearing people out