Keep it up :)

i can see an asari harem working, would be pretty cool...

this was the second time the krogan reviewed mad max...

thats interesting, and true; if faces aren't visible, humans tend to get more aggressive... works for animals as well, dogs for example...

god damn it... did you have to ruin aleria? i was rooting for her, but after being with the idiot (carlos), shes spoiled goods...

Welp spent a couple of weeks reading this, and i must say im liking it.
Hopefully the author continues.

So good ty

nice

Stumbled upon this fic which was promptly devoured in a few days. Thanks for the read and look forward to more!

Good chap

I'd have demanded to be made a super soldier with krogan or vorcha level healing.

This was very good and very fun chapter to read. I can understand why some people would be annoyed with the retelling of the games story but honestly I like it. It’s less pressure put on you to come up with new material and allows us to have an idea of how things are progressing in the story compared to the game.

All in all, great work. Love the planning, love the movements and shifting around between the characters and combat. Not to mention you actually used everyone to your disposal rather than just the standard three-person ground team and left everyone else sitting on their asses in the Normandy.

This is good work you did and I can’t wait to see what else you do and the conclusion to the Virmire arc. I’m both excited, and a little worried something bad is going to happen. Keep up the good work.

This was a good chapter, thank you!

Keep it up :)

Good chapter.