| Reviews for Mass Effect: Plan for the Galaxy |
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   frankieu chapter 8 . 7/24/2017 nice chapter thx for writing it yay for playing with tavos :D will be fun to see what kind of deal he is able to make it her perhaps drop a hint that there might be something to find in a temple :D |
| Danen5 chapter 7 . 7/21/2017 This is new to me. Its awesome and it gave me a few ideas as to where I can go thru with my own storyline (pending drafts). I have to be honest though, I find emotional scenes to be very luring and powerfully effective, on me anyways, and I got depressed over the last two chapters but hey overall I say this is awesome and hope you continue this. Also just wondering...why a weapons corporation? And what type of weapons technology will he 'Brock', 're-introduce' or introduce to the ME galaxy? And was that Manuel guy an angelic being with 'Him' being the G-man himself? |
| rfpizzle chapter 7 . 7/14/2017 Instant favorite, me thinks. I can't say I particularly liked the lead-up that was the first chapter but then again it was kinda necessary in order to move on. Everything else I love! Novel ideas and your writing style is very nice. You've successfully shown Brock (I'm assuming Oliver is a soon-to-be-forgotten name) as a measured and collected individual with a stern countenance so visualizing everything is really easy :) Thanks for writing and I hope to see more soon! RFP |
| Betapike chapter 7 . 7/9/2017 485 billion credits just by knowing where one particular asteroid was... Truly knowledge is the most valuable resource of all. |
| ErzherzogKarl chapter 7 . 7/8/2017 I like that you change the point of view. In my opinion, it gives a broader understanding of the characters and gives them more depth. The only human supremacist organisation is Cerberus. They rose to real power by M3. Ashley represented the "worst" or most xenophobe group in the Alliance and she only said humans should stand on their own feet. According to M3 she was right. Everyone abandoned humanity in its hour of need and only gave some help after their "shit" got taken care of. |
| brandonack96 chapter 7 . 7/8/2017 I was wondering if you are going to have Krogans and or Turians join the crew? They would make excellent security, scientist or engineer's? |
| deadtrooper chapter 7 . 7/7/2017 interesting prospect. cant wait to read more. overall an awesome chapter. good luck and keep on writting |
| frankieu chapter 7 . 7/7/2017 nice chapter yay for the first pay load will be fun to see the news hitting that back at the citedel do hope sal does not any thing stupid |
| zapper25 chapter 7 . 7/7/2017 intresting chapter |
| zapper25 chapter 6 . 7/1/2017 This is one hell of a heavy story keep up this great writing your characters are realy alive will await your next chapter |
| VODKA18 chapter 6 . 7/1/2017 Good story. |
| Artyom-Dreizehn chapter 6 . 6/29/2017 Wow, you made me cry... It's good to have people to talk to when one experience hardship, Aleria fit the bill when it comes to that, can't help myself to compare her said cheerful personality to the MC Asari from Psi Effect. Smooth interactions between the two, kind of a shock that it was his son, still have more mysteries to answer about him on the why? Thumbs up! And love to see the next update! |
| dekuton chapter 6 . 6/29/2017 well done. bout bawled my eyes out at work the moment he mentioned his son. grown ass man bout to cry. ugh. damn things anyways. well done |
| jdude281 chapter 6 . 6/29/2017 I like this story so far. And I think you did an especially good job at showing some of Neilson's ptsd. I also like the relationship you're building between him and Aleria. I kinda found in this chapter that when she's not being all bubbly and cheerful, but is more kind and gentle, she almost acts similar to Liara. Not quite as nieve, but still. Anyway, great job, and keep it up. |
| deadtrooper chapter 6 . 6/29/2017 love the chapter. good pacing. nice revelation and character development. overall an awesome chapter. good luck and keep on writting |