Ti's but a scratch

Your legs gone!

Had worse

YOU LIAR!

Question: was it not possible to just cast a pull field on shepard instead of Brock jumping in and losing a leg?

Eh it's just a leg. Medicine in ME can grow limbs back.

This story is basically the last great SI for Mass Effect. I can only hope you continue your amazing work.

His leg would be gone “below” the knee. Not “above” the knee.

Love it. Chapter was well written. Im enjoying the writing style immensely.

nice

awesome chapter that was a very well done fight very cool great work

Love it! Just wished it had been long enough to include the after action responses from everyone. I hope we’ll see everyone’s reaction to Brock’s activities. What does it say when CSEC is wiped out and the only defense people had was a human led pmc. That on top of him cashing in a favor to have the alliance ready to step in and defend the counsel and station after the collective council fleets were nealy wiped out. Really hope to see what comes next and how Brock’s actions and presence changes things. Keep up the great work.

Everyone loves the matrix lol! Saren was redeemed in the end too so that is an improovement in itself. TFTC

Good scene. And I love the twist of the MAC killing the reaper off instantly.
Poor Brock. Guy really can’t catch a break. Luckily you can flash clone or go full cybernetic in ME. He fine.

"A mass accelerator propels a solid metal slug using precisely-controlled electromagnetic attraction and repulsion"

All guns that are big enough in the Mass Effect universe are - by definition - MACs. You just can't be like "Well, we made a MAC and it can ONE-SHOT A FUCKING REAPER!" when every gun in the setting IS ALREADY a MAC.

Also, don't make guns that can one-shot a Reaper. It's fucking stupid. The Protheans were firing Particle Beam Cannons and struggled against the Reapers, your damn MAC ain't gonna do shit.

Unless you've got a Death Star or a Necron battleship or a Borg cube, you ain't one-shotting a Reaper.

I do like the general thrust of this story, but between your weird insistence on having Shepard CONSTANTLY question someone who is fully funding them and been nothing but supportive and now your idea that you can just one-shot a Reaper with a technology Mass Effect ALREADY USES as if it was some special superweapon... I'm done.

While I enjoyed the chapter I have one question, what happened to Wrex?
He's not mentioned at all even during Garrus' POV with the rest of the ground team.

nice chapter thx for writing it

well well well, brock is losing more and more parts of him in the end he will become Miller without an arm and a leg by the way he will not be able to see the light lmao