Reviews for Harry Potter Dropouts |
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Guest chapter 8 . 4/5/2019 Will there be a part 2 on the story following the kid's story? |
CarolWim chapter 1 . 3/11/2019 Crappy story. Delusional |
Guest chapter 4 . 1/28/2019 To jest trochę chore.. ale ciekawe.. nie podoba mi się tylko to że dziewczyny są dziwkami a faceci to praca fizyczna.. i to za wyniki w nauce.. to takie upodlenie kobiety moim skromnym zdaniem.. natomiast postawa Harrego mi się podoba |
a guy1013 chapter 8 . 12/6/2018 I'll assume anymale child there came from Harry and all the girls came from the spell and hot stuff |
Guest chapter 8 . 5/31/2018 Well there be a part 2 of Harry Potter dropouts. |
Crypt chapter 8 . 3/28/2018 What an incredibly strange story. I'm surprised this hasn't been taken down yet... You'd be better off posting this on hp fanfic archive, or similar alternate sites so that you can include more detailed and expanded smut scenes. |
geekysole chapter 1 . 3/5/2018 Idk what is worse.. the fact this story has not been booted from site, someone actually wrote this or that people actually think this shit up. On a side note* I really hope you do not get a date to the Jr prom.. no one deserves this. |
DarkSorcerer888 chapter 1 . 12/26/2017 The Griffindor Patil twin's name is Parvati, after the wife of Shiva. Parvati, not Pavarti. |
Dudtheman chapter 8 . 12/2/2017 yeah its all good tell your kid becomes a drop out. fun read thanks |
Goose chapter 1 . 11/16/2017 Garbage. Just mindless smut. Story makes absolutely no sense whatsoever. Why did you write this? |
Guest chapter 1 . 11/1/2017 Not at all credible. I stopped reading quite soon as it appears only to create badly written smut. |
angit chapter 8 . 10/20/2017 It was completely werid but I surprisingly enjoyed the story. Most people can't pull off what you did and make it so amazing. Good job on a good story. |
gunghoun chapter 1 . 8/29/2017 Putting "*time skip*" instead of just a line break looks really sloppy and unprofessional. Worse, it's made completely redundant by the next sentence being "it had been a few weeks" or something else to indicate that time has progressed. I didn't see any explanation as to why Harry, Ron, and Hermione, Shacklebolt, or anyone else who went into hiding to overthrow a tyrannical government are just suddenly okay with, or in fact help bring about, this Dropout law. It might be in there, or maybe it's just "who cares because porn," but there were too many spelling errors or other sloppiness (personal drop out picks were explicitly from the best to worst score, yet Harry, the lowest score of the winners, got to pick Daphne before Astoria could?) for me to continue or give it the benefit of the doubt. |
CreatorOfChaos01 chapter 8 . 8/19/2017 U guys should really continue this, but with more plot and less sex, but u can continue to make Draco's life a living hell |
FanFic World010 chapter 2 . 8/19/2017 Lol que historia mas loca |