Reviews for Harry Potter Dropouts
Arsenalfiction chapter 2 . 6/11/2017
Obviously their minds have been altered. But I am actually finding some of the interaction with Daphne to be kind of sweet. I am also wondering what is going on with the guys as they have not been seen yet.
xNaruHina chapter 1 . 6/7/2017
What? Daphne of all people failed? Also, Harry wasn't going to fail or anything. Even in canon he didn't fail 3 classes or even come close to it.
Bonitalapaz chapter 2 . 6/6/2017
Hey, just one question, there is going to be a story behind this idea or is just sex and slaves all the time¿ I kind of undersand that the dropouts are acting differently that they real personality but the other should be themselves (just my opinion).
Are they acting like that because they need to repopulate de wizarding world and once they are pregnant it will be different¿
ThunderReborn chapter 2 . 6/5/2017
Two things. One, I want to see if Astoria ends up trying to kidnap Daphne and what happens due to this.
Two, the plot of this reminds me of a hentai called Dropout. Which is literally the same thing as this except the concept of magic.
Another guest chapter 1 . 6/5/2017
I had expected some sort of general mutiny after the new "law" was proclaimed, and some action to follow from that. That could have become a good read. But halfway through the first chapter, this story has already fallen flatter than an ironing board, and sunk deeper than the Mariana Trench. Believe an old geezer: it is far more fun to have sex than to talk or write about it!
rider-84 chapter 2 . 6/4/2017
I like the story. I would suggest that Harry would end up with both Greengrasses along with the rest of the honor students and their personal dropouts. I would suggest that you have Harry improve the most and in return is awarded two more dropouts in Tracey Davies and Susan bones. Keep up the good work.
Guest chapter 2 . 6/3/2017
I'm... somewhat wondering if it's even possible for any of the Dropouts to escape their fate. It requires studying, but... they don't seem to want to study.
capnbooth4 chapter 2 . 6/3/2017
Can you make this a Harry/Harem story that includes the other Honors and their Dropouts?
Nachtt chapter 2 . 6/3/2017
People need to chill, this is smut. Who cares if the writing wasn't world class? it was fine in my opinion.
flight.of.the.phoenix.86 chapter 2 . 6/3/2017
your grammar and names placement is quite pathetic to be honest!
spookdoder chapter 2 . 6/3/2017
The 2nd chapter was very confusing to read lol. Atleast the first 2500 words were, it was very confusing as to who said or did things. You should really read through the chapter a few times before you post.
Guest chapter 1 . 5/24/2017
If this is Harry/Daphne then why the hell did Harry and Hermoine sleep?
Who...What?
capnbooth4 chapter 1 . 5/24/2017
Update soon. Can you make thisa Harry/Harem story? If so, can you make a list of harem members?
Nachtt chapter 1 . 5/24/2017
I definitely don't know where the inspirtion for this story comes from. *cough* hentai *cough*
ctc1000 chapter 1 . 5/24/2017
Good start. Was hoping to see more Harry/Hermione. I hope you focus more on Harry and less on the the other Honor Students. Also will Astoria be looking for revenge given that harry took her sister?
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