Reviews for Overwatch X RWBY: Team GHLF
ApertureGaming011 chapter 5 . 5/31/2017
Hey, this fanfic is awwwweeeesome!

I can already see the potential of your work!
Is hana a esports player or something here? It would be cool if she is.
Guest chapter 5 . 5/31/2017
Not bad
Burke23 chapter 4 . 5/31/2017
Honestly not sure who she is.
Burke23 chapter 3 . 5/31/2017
She is pretty cool.
SpecialSprite12 chapter 1 . 5/27/2017
I Luv It
Burke23 chapter 2 . 5/27/2017
Personal favorite of mine.
Burke23 chapter 1 . 5/27/2017
ShugoYuuki123 chapter 4 . 5/27/2017
Awesome story, for Tracers one you've repeated a part of the fight though. Looking forward to the next chapter! :)
All Hail Lord Megatron chapter 4 . 5/27/2017
Good I really like it now I can't wait to see the chapters were they will meet the rwby people
Alternet RedSkys chapter 4 . 5/27/2017
Well the story is going along great in my opinion. All the trailers gave a real good showcase of the four main characters.

Nice semblance for Fareeha. It's something unexpected that's for sure.

The background dialog was fitting given her beliefs.

So like Hana her suit is able to be compact and her rocket launcher is more portable.
Crimson chapter 3 . 5/26/2017
I feel like that was something from Death Battle
All Hail Lord Megatron chapter 1 . 5/26/2017
Nice I really like it nice job
All Hail Lord Megatron chapter 3 . 5/26/2017
Good I wounder who you will pair them with I can't wait to see what you will use them for your fanfic it should be fun
Alternet RedSkys chapter 3 . 5/26/2017
I think you need to fix the last bit it sort of out of place.

Okay so she doesn't need it for daily use nice.

Have to say the background dialog really fits tracer a lot.

She wants to make the world a better place that's nice.
Alternet RedSkys chapter 2 . 5/26/2017
Well Hana manhandled those grim.
So she has her handgun and mech nice.

A Faunus?
Wait is she sick?
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