I LOVED this! It's beautifully written, the pacing is good, everyone is firmly in character, and (stay with me now) I loved the the OC!

Normally OC's a tolerable at best, especially when they have romantic relations with a cannon character. But this OC? At first (much like Severus) I was skeptical and annoyed with them, but only after a few chapters of their presents and I wanted to meet their babies!

While there is no sequel to this story (yet ;) it ends on a really good note. I can imagine how the rest would fall out pretty well.

Thank dear author, I look forward to reading more of your work!

The story was quite good and I'm very impressed.
I really liked your OC character of Covey.
It was a different kind of therapy that eventually helped Harry heal in a somewhat different way.
There should be a sequel and I would take immense pleasure in reading it.
Thanks for writing this storyline.
Take care and be safe!

So far, the story is good, especially the first two chapters.
For Harry to finally get his point across to Snape was AWESOME.
I'm sad to say I'm sorry that Harry has to endure pain in order to heal. It's frustrating.
Onward I read.
Take care and be safe!

Oh Harry, oh Snape.

This story is breaking my heart

Lastly, he unclasped her bra, slipped it off one arm, and then pulled it through the other side; a trick he learned years ago from watching Lily do it.

Why would he know how Lily took off her bra?

I absolutely adore Covey!

Go Harry! As much as I love Snape he deserves what’s happening right now because he just assumed Harry was like James when Harry couldn’t be anything less like his father if he tried.

Can’t they just like take some of Petunia’s blood? Lol.

Damn. So Harry forced Snape to see his memories? Snape didn’t see the Blood Quill though. Damn.

I hope we see the golden trios friendship! And Ginny!

Very well done. Thank you.

Kudos again: you're also the only author who mentioned the common HP fanon of bad-eyeglass-prescription ~and~ connected it to HP's dismal Potions performance.

Kudos: you have interesting and unique ideas re. what HP requires for his healing and what the interim consequences might be / how to minimize their harm. For instance, now that you've stated it, the transference of pain to SS in the process of extracting the Blood Quill's Dark Magic from HP seems not just logical but inevitable.

I don't have the energy to review well or often but expect the interest to remain. Sorry to anticipate that you intend this punk Tonks for SS but will keep on for at least a while. At least SS and HP will not continue to consider themselves enemies.

Thanks for writing.

You did a WONDERFUL job here. I loved it. Relationship between Harry, Severus, and covey:all so great and unique. The distress and pain, so necessarily written and with feeling and direction with Harry's breakdowns and needs. The scene with the 3 after Harry asked for his need just squeezed my heart. So happy I found this!