Reviews for Promise of Winter |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I like this story alot and I hope you keep updating it looking forward to the next chapter |
![]() ![]() Hope next chapter wont take to long. |
![]() ![]() Honestly I really dislike how Shirou is portrayed handling the shop. It'd be one thing if he was on his own, or had some rich backer, but here he's also responsible for Illya's well being and putting food on the table, and seems to be deliberately trying to bankrupt the shop. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great chapter! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love this |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh shiet! Shirou snapped! |
![]() ![]() ![]() it lives! great chapter! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Now that's a damn cliffhanger...This chapter was so pact and couldn't stop cheering. Illya's command seals showing up had given me a sinister laugh, though that'll never compare close to hers. Looking forward to the next chapter, and thank you for this story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow! A new chapter só soon? I thought I'd have to wait a lot for each one, but this might be more frequent than I expected. Well, I'll still expect them to take longer because this one might be an exception, but it's good to have a little hope. It's funny, people run to help when they hear pained screams, but Shirou has to go when he stops hearing them. So, we already got Illya's little sister mode, and now we got her psycho mode. Only one left is the mature older sister one, wonder when we'll get that. Seriously, why does Fate not have a Illya route? She's clearly the best girl. About the OCs, no one would complain if we got some of those White Fang people like Lepus as slav... I mean, employees. It would help with the staff problem. So, if they actually manage to run, who's gonna heal Roman? I don't think he'd live if they don't heal him. The heart is not the only thing Vytal (pun intended) in the human body you know, and I'm pretty sure she hit at least the lungs, probably many other things as well. |
![]() ![]() ![]() its kinda ooc for ruby to act careless with weapons. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Thanks for the chapter _. |
![]() ![]() ![]() God, why am I imagining Illya as Pitou(?) from HxH |
![]() ![]() ![]() I see the reason for Illya’s behavior because in canon she acted like a villain but she had reasons for it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I had to comment after reading that guest being a bitch and hiding without using an account. Did you even read the story. They are out of the wires and in front of Shirou. I don't think you understand the definition of escaped if you think they have escaped from Illya and Shirou lol. |
![]() ![]() ![]() WUUUT THIS IS STILL ALIVE |