Did ilya get the madens powers somehow?

wait shit are shirou and ilya woring for salem? man oz is fucked

Makes sense, all of them are children and Shirou forgets they aren't as mature as Ilya or himself

Lol at Ilya's bro-con tendencies at the end

Interesting intro, look forward to seeing more

sooooo freaking cute.

Just caught up. I think the biggest problem with this fic is it’s too slow. 10 chapters in and only now are things actually starting to happen, and it’s pretty confusing. I prefer your Fate/Zero fanfic a lot more.

Was this chapter written before RWBY Volume 7? The Winter maiden in canon, Fria, is an old lady locked in an Atlas military facility. She wouldn’t have been going anywhere and was pretty much the exact opposite of rebellious.

Interesting. A Shirou from a route similar to both Heaven’s Feel and Miyuverse? Those are arguably the two strongest “normal” versions of Shirou if we’re not counting his servant forms. This Shirou should be able to slaughter any of the RWBY characters in a 1v1 except for Salem because of her immortality.

I really enjoyed this and am excited to see where you decide to take this next

I kind of wanna know how that happened

Yo! Now that I've watched the Fate series in between these chapters, so many more things make sense now. Keep it up, man, this story is gettin' good!

This has literally become crap.
But what can we expect? 50k words in and barely a semblance of a plot.

Also, his lungs are SHREDDED. It should be IMPOSSIBLE for him to be able to even BREATHE, let alone speak. He should be drowning in his own blood after being stuck like a pig.

He honestly should have been dead the second he was released, which should have been impossible since he shouldn't have been able to say ANYTHING because (as mentioned above) SHREDDED LUNGS and CHOKING ON HIS OWN BLOOD.

Illya isnt too OOC, this fits Fate VN Illya alot. Shirou in HF is much stricter than other routes. So its understandable how he acts here.

Why does anyone need Ozpin's approval to open a shop..? He's a school principal. Not the leader of the kingdom, not the governor, nor is he the mayor, and I sincerely doubt he owns the building they [literally] set up shop in. There is no reason ANYONE should need HIS approval to have a livelihood.

And OF COURSE Ozpin knows about the UBW, he's so old and SOOOO Omniscient...