Reviews for Promise of Winter |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I still don't get why they like them shifting weapons. They're by physics weaker than the same weapon by its self. They're more complicated than a single weapons. Just remember that they fight to kill Grimm while we mere mortals fight to hunt down armed men. Give me a simple Toledo Steel Rapier, a Ruger redhawk and a cigarette loaded with a .22 lr bullet and I'm good. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Poor Ruby with her super naive curiosity,, that is most of the time bad for her and really Yang needs anger management period. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I actually really like this chapter so it was fine. Keep up the good writing I can't wait to read the next chapter |
![]() ![]() ![]() Shirou will protect that smile |
![]() ![]() ![]() I though this chapter was fine. I really liked the ending even i it felt a bit hurried. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Thanks for the Update! beautyfull |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nice chapter. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I want more |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is amazing! It's unique preimses and the way you write it make for a cery enjoyable read. Looking forward to the next chapter! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I have a realll sense of foreshadowing between Illya and Shirou from their titles. The scene though really tragic, nostalgic and really really sweet... Well, bittersweet. Liked it a lot. I could understand why you wanted the chapter to commemorate the movie. Thanks for the chapter and honestly looking forward to more! |
![]() ![]() ![]() It's funny that Shirou saved them from being beaten down by a girl who looks like she's 11. I'd caution you to remember that this story apparently kicks off right around the Vytal festival, meaning you're very close to the Fall. I bring this up so that you keep in mind you don't have a whole lot of time in canon to build a role for Shirou and Illya to play, unless you're just going to have him appear out of nowhere and crush Cinder and her group. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Updated! Woo! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Woo! Updated! |
![]() ![]() ![]() woah, next chap please! |
![]() ![]() ![]() interesting.. |