Reviews for Promise of Winter
Frank Horrigan chapter 3 . 8/26/2017
I still don't get why they like them shifting weapons. They're by physics weaker than the same weapon by its self. They're more complicated than a single weapons. Just remember that they fight to kill Grimm while we mere mortals fight to hunt down armed men. Give me a simple Toledo Steel Rapier, a Ruger redhawk and a cigarette loaded with a .22 lr bullet and I'm good.
AscendedHumanity chapter 3 . 8/26/2017
Poor Ruby with her super naive curiosity,, that is most of the time bad for her and really Yang needs anger management period.
ivan0061509 chapter 3 . 8/26/2017
I actually really like this chapter so it was fine. Keep up the good writing I can't wait to read the next chapter
Im a guest chapter 3 . 8/26/2017
Shirou will protect that smile
Mr.PuffPuff chapter 3 . 8/26/2017
I though this chapter was fine. I really liked the ending even i it felt a bit hurried.
Kono Dio Brando Da chapter 3 . 8/26/2017
Thanks for the Update!
beautyfull
Ressan chapter 3 . 8/26/2017
Nice chapter.
Neema Amiry chapter 3 . 8/26/2017
I want more
Silver Will chapter 3 . 8/26/2017
This is amazing! It's unique preimses and the way you write it make for a cery enjoyable read. Looking forward to the next chapter!
StoryReiter chapter 3 . 8/26/2017
I have a realll sense of foreshadowing between Illya and Shirou from their titles. The scene though really tragic, nostalgic and really really sweet... Well, bittersweet. Liked it a lot. I could understand why you wanted the chapter to commemorate the movie. Thanks for the chapter and honestly looking forward to more!
ZenithTempest chapter 3 . 8/26/2017
It's funny that Shirou saved them from being beaten down by a girl who looks like she's 11. I'd caution you to remember that this story apparently kicks off right around the Vytal festival, meaning you're very close to the Fall. I bring this up so that you keep in mind you don't have a whole lot of time in canon to build a role for Shirou and Illya to play, unless you're just going to have him appear out of nowhere and crush Cinder and her group.
Kami-Sama-Senpai chapter 3 . 8/26/2017
Updated! Woo!
Kami-Sama-Senpai chapter 1 . 8/26/2017
Woo! Updated!
pltrgst chapter 2 . 8/17/2017
woah, next chap please!
pltrgst chapter 1 . 8/17/2017
interesting..
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