This is just sad.

Yeah, what could go wrong? Heh.

Love it. Domestic and fluffy, a very satisfying read.

Also, Famous Last Words.

Thank you for the chapter. There is so much potentials (for shenanigans, also bunny and rainbows) in this story. Hope you can keep it up.

"I...I just barely left for a minute..."

Ilya found her brother standing in the middle of the former-UBW Weapons Store, former due to the sudden and violent renovation it underwent from the red, yellow, and white threesome.

Weapons of all kinds littered the vicinity, as if thrown about by gale force winds.

He kept muttering 'barely a minute' over and over again.

good

Loving the story already. It's so different from what I manage to read so far.

I personally think you've handled the Yang scene very well. Most, probably nearly all, rwby fan fic writers always have Yang be overly flirtatious to main character(s) A or B. Depending on if it's a crossover story or not. From what I've seen of rwby canon and the fandom, the really over flirtatious attitude is completely fan-made. If it was canon then i think in past volumes we would of seen Yang try to flirt with Sun, Neptune, or possibly amy other male character.

But you didn't do that. You didn't have Yang give Shirou a teasing wink when she said he worked like magic, Yang didn't make any sexual innuendos when she said "Sorry, but I like my fights up close and personal." Yang was strictly professional with a bit of joking to show she wasn't super serious. I honestly loved that you did that. Don't get me wrong, having a flirtatious Yang can be enjoyable to read and perfectly fine to have; but when every rwby fic (that I've read) has Yang flirt with everyone at a first glance gets boring to read.

So you're doing a great job on writing Yang.

Interesting so far, I hope to see more soon.

This story has quite a lot of potential. You've got most personalities down and your writing is nice to read. The story is interesting so far.
About Yang: In my opinion her personality can be summed up as Momma bearextrovercyimpulsivenesspuns. Hope this helps.

Really enjoying it so far, although there's not much of a plot yet.

Colors more colors!

One thing I'll mention is that Ilya needs to show off her more serious side. She does enjoy acting like a child but we know that she's older than she seems so at least in her thoughts have her be more mature even if she doesn't show it to the public

Sweet update! Love Illya's hints of badassery, and I can't wait to see what other shenanigans occur.

please not another 2 months